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nakamaruyo

[ryopin] Round Three

Oct 05, 2007 21:00

It’s Jin’s idea to play a drinking game. “We all need to relax,” he wheedles, and Ryo and Yamapi agree wholeheartedly.

Yamapi loses the first round. “Now you have to do whatever we tell you to,” Ryo declares.

“I thought the punishment was that you had to take another shot,” Yamapi complains.

“This is special,” Jin says in a falsely ( Read more... )

mm porn!, ryo/jin/yamapi

Comments 33

spurious October 6 2007, 04:43:56 UTC

“Yeah,” he gasps, before turning to Ryo. “For someone so tiny, you feel really big,” he chokes out. Jin hides his grin behind Yamapi’s neck.

“For someone so ugly, you feel really good,” Ryo groans, trying and clearly failing to deliver a scathing comeback.

this is like, the best line. lines. ever.

a;skjdfa;slkdjfauiaeg;hrdjksf;klawsdjf this was really hot.

nakamaruyo October 6 2007, 04:54:09 UTC

I am quite fond of that section as well xD

yay I love how you love this bc I love your porn!

swtjemz October 6 2007, 05:30:03 UTC

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i love this a lot. to the point where i am just so incoherent that the porn i was writing kinda flew out of my head.

ryopin ftw!!!

nakamaruyo October 7 2007, 01:37:13 UTC

EW DO NOT TELL ME THAT. HOW CAN I MAKE THE IDEAS COME BACK INTO YOUR HEAD :/ :/ :/ seriously, the porn you wrote on this was so, sooo hot. So if you have more planned, then yesssssss

But I am so glad you liked it!

*dying*... beevosteethos October 6 2007, 10:26:54 UTC

Holy crap, you win for writing the hottest thing I've read all day!!

I...wow. Ryopin is just too hot for words yet you managed it! *admires*

I think I'm going to have a cold shower now before my blood boils any higher and I die of smex-overload! XDD

Great job. *hugs*

Re: *dying*... nakamaruyo October 7 2007, 01:49:29 UTC

hee yay! *feels like a winner*

oh, I'm sure no words could do them real justice *____* honestly I don't think this is written very well, but it's smut, and smut standards aren't that high...but I'm really glad you liked it (:

yayy *hugs back*

4_03_am October 6 2007, 14:49:41 UTC

wepoirpw93r89pujzlvn,zm,mq2013ij.,m godgodgodgod that was ridiculously hot. *_______________*

“Nice,” Jin murmurs into Yamapi’s hair, inhaling deeply. “Nice.” and the bit about Yamapi grasping Jin's hand in his so firmly and Jin squeezing back for reassurance, FAVORITES. ♥__♥

nakamaruyo October 7 2007, 01:50:58 UTC

YAY ilu, thank you!

Hey I like those parts too :D

love_akira October 6 2007, 19:00:35 UTC

Wahhhhh!!! lt's awesome...love it.
One of the most wonderful porns ever read.
I'm feeling weird now...nonono i hav to calm down.

nakamaruyo October 7 2007, 01:51:34 UTC

hahahaha thank you!