First Dates Part 2b

[naja_nivea]

Title: First Dates
Chapter: 2/3
Author: Naja_Nivea
Rating: PG-13
Characters:  Derek, Sarah, John, Cameron, Cheri, Morris
Pairing:  Derek/Sarah UST, John/Cheri and Morris/Cameron allusions

Genre: General/Romance

Warning:  Some naughty language and hints at sex
Status: WIP
Word Count: 4500 ish

Beta: None
Disclaimer: I do not own anyone you have heard of.

Comments

[raincitygirl]

“He is very scary, to his enemies.” Cameron supplied, “he suffers from post traumatic stress disorder and is often depressed and anxious. Does that count as mental?”

very funny

[damsels_fly]

“Then I’m Derek Phillips and we are already married.”
I. love. this. fic.

[indiefic]

Another great chapter!

The meet and greet between Derek and Cheri's father was fabulous. You hit that out of the park.

“He is very scary, to his enemies.” Cameron supplied, “he suffers from post traumatic stress disorder and is often depressed and anxious. Does that count as mental?”

LOL! That's fabulous Cameron dialog. Not to mention it makes me feel all squishy about Derek.

You are not ‘women’ you are Sarah Connor, the mother of the savior of humanity and the woman my brother was in love with his entire adult life.

That's a great line.

“That is hardly the most depressing thing about where I came from.”

*sniffle*

This section was a lot more serious than the previous ones, but no less enjoyable. Great story. Can't wait for more.

[naja_nivea]

Sadly the next section is even more depressing. Because of the word limits on LJ, I had to break the story up in sort of unnatural ways. It is supposed to be like a fantasy at the beginning with fun and games, then get darker as it goes on.

[lilyoftheval5]

'The two from the future walked to the door like they were planning on blowing it up.'
*snickers* I can just imagine them stomping/stalking to the front door.
I'm glad you showed Derek can stand on his own.