Imperio, Because I Love You
Title: Imperio, Because I Love You
Fandom: Harry Potter
Disclaimer: J.K. Rowling's, not mine.
Rating: none
Feedback: I'm a comment whore.
Author’s Notes: This was written for the Hogsmeade contest with this prompt: The theme of this challenge is curses. No no, not the stuff you yell out your car window on the way to work in the morning! The other ( Read more... )
Fandom: Harry Potter
Disclaimer: J.K. Rowling's, not mine.
Rating: none
Feedback: I'm a comment whore.
Author’s Notes: This was written for the Hogsmeade contest with this prompt: The theme of this challenge is curses. No no, not the stuff you yell out your car window on the way to work in the morning! The other ( Read more... )
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This is an imaginative launch into the prompt. I like the subtle strokes of characterization you give to Xenophilius, the way you hint at his place in the school's hierarchy with Don't call me crazy. Everyone else does. Not you too.
It's a relatively distant (and by that I mean poised and poetic and not like, mean. XD) piece, which works well for a fic of this length. It's a creepily believable Xeno, and one I'd never imagined, mainly because Luna seems so self-assured and uh, well-parented? XD
I wanna read more about Xeno now.
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I really wanted to do something that was kind of disturbing. It's not necessarily how I view Xeno, he seems like a very caring father and I'm sure he was a good husband, but I just had this urge to write something that would make the reader feel a little uncomfortable. My twisted mind came up with this. lol
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