u reread it, y?I don't know cuz the poem is about some bad things that have hapend that don't seem fare that in my mined don't fit. who am I to say what is right or roung but those things felt roung so i jsut add them in and I will probly add more. i will bucher the addrigenal, becouse it was never right, or inprtent to beginwith. 95% of that poem no buddy but me will ever undersand.
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hahahaha
i like this.
its completely and utterly "Kalan"
its really cool but i was giggling the entire time.
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i thought it was very.....you-ish.
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i liked it better before you added those couple lines.
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=P
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i liked it.
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