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Lisa (3/?) [Series: No Regrets]

Nov 23, 2008 00:59

TITLE: Lisa
AUTHOR: naddypants
RATING: 15
CHARACTERS: Jack/Ianto, team.
SUMMARY: What Ianto does next after Lisa. (still 1st person, set post-Countrycide)
AUTHOR'S NOTES: 1. My NaNo died. 2. I forgot the finale to Fading Yourself and 3. I decided to finally get this fic on the road. Inspired by the band Steer Clear, and I will be finishing Fading ( Read more... )

ianto jones, jack

Comments 16

thrace_adams November 23 2008, 01:24:57 UTC

Oh poor Ianto! GAH this was so sad. Very well written.

naddypants November 23 2008, 11:45:18 UTC

Thank you very much!
I really appreciate it! :)

missthingsplace November 23 2008, 01:44:47 UTC

So sad ... but so good.

naddypants November 23 2008, 11:45:35 UTC

Thanks! I really appreciate it!

just_being_me08 November 23 2008, 02:00:50 UTC

NO IANTO DON'T DO IT!!!

Haha sorry, I got abit carried away there :P But goodness, me, I adore your writing so much. I have to say, I usually find self harming Ianto hard to read... but I didn't here. You just make it fit, justify it almost. It really is incredible. And you're description of his emotions, of him seeing Lisa.....god it was just all so vivid. Really, really amazing! And you wrote this while going to Dublin??? :O

Oh and his uncertainties about Jack at the end....goodness me Naddy....so so so powerful!! *huggles you and Ianto*

You my dear are an endless source of awesome yourself!!
*hands out cookies, and special chocolate covered JM* :D enjoy!!!

loveeeee
sisi
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naddypants November 23 2008, 11:57:59 UTC

That was my feeling too. :P

It's okay! Awwwwks you're fab! :) Me too tbh, which is why I was wary of writing it, but I'm glad I managed to pull it off! Bless you! Yes, I wrote it on my way to Dublin. LOL :D

*blushes*

Awwwwks. Jack's mixing up his confused little emotions! Poor boyy!

Really? Awww! ^^ *huggles*
OOOH choccy JM! Lovelyyyy.

Awwwks!
love, naddy :)
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

bloodredroses1 November 23 2008, 02:07:08 UTC

Almost missed the 2nd & 3rd parts this one because there isn't any connection between their titles other than the number. You might think about using an over all title. Just something to think about.

naddypants November 23 2008, 11:59:14 UTC

Oops! You make a very good point!
I'm glad you found them though!
I'll be putting the title "(Series:No Regrets)" after each individual title, so you can find them! :)

Thanks for bringing that up!

laurapetri November 23 2008, 02:59:30 UTC

So sad hope Jack finds him in time

naddypants November 23 2008, 11:59:28 UTC

I hope so too. :P