SGA FanFic: This Never Happened to Captain Kirk (Chapter 16)

[nacinom]

Title: This Never Happened to Captain Kirk
Chapter: 16 of 17+
Chapter word count: 2269
Pairings: Sheppard/Teyla
Genre: Drama, Angst, Hurt/Comfort
Rating: R (some chapters are NC-17)
Chapter Warnings: References to the Sunday (season 3) and First Contact and The Lost Tribe (season 5) episodes
Disclaimer: SGA world is not mine. I wrote this story for fun,

Comments

[mrswolfie]

Great Chapter

Really like the part where Teyla is thinking about Doctor Hewston great tie in to the original series. Great to see Teyla's point of view of their relationship. Can't wait for Teyla to give John lots of TLC. Please don't be too long, really like this story.

[nacinom]

I am glad you liked the tie in to the canon episodes. I am also looking forward to Teyla helping John recover. These next few chapters are tough to write so they might take a little longer. Thanks for sticking with the story.

[ssagey]

love the snips and reasonings from the other episodes..love getting it from teyla's view..
and love getting a look into her and johns relationship and how far it has progressed..lovely...and how much she cares for him..
looking forward tro their reunion...and hope john lets teyla help him heal...
and kharla might feel guilty when she meets teyla and realizes john is in a realationship...
I know teyl has enough compassion in her to help them both..
love it
hugs

[nacinom]

I am so happy that you are enjoying the snippets and tie in from other episodes that I am trying to use to show the growth in their relationship. Teyla's point of view has a big role in the next few chapters. I am pretty sure that Kharla feels guilty already even without knowing that John is in a relationship. Compassion is going to be very important for everybody to heal. Thanks for continuing to follow and comment on the story.

[sherry57]

Just discovered this story. It's a powerful whump story for sure. Now looking forward to the the next chapter. I imagine it could be difficult for even a couple very much in love to overcome what's happened here. It'll be interesting to see how John and Teyla manage.

[nacinom]

Thank you for reading my story and leaving me a comment. I really appreciate it. I am working on the next chapter. Stay tuned but be patient. :-)