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naboru_narluin

Balancing (T)act

Aug 27, 2010 14:38

Title: Balancing (T)act
Continuity: G1
Warnings: slash, plug’n’play/tactile, Virgin!Breakdown, non/dub-con
Characters/Pairing: Sunstreaker/Breakdown
Prompt: Dominant
Rating: R, probably
Summary: Breakdown dislikes being looked at, and Sunstreaker wants to know the reason.
Disclaimer: Sadly, I own nothing.
Beta: ultharkitty:D

Note: Written for the 28 ( Read more... )

.transformers (g1), transformers, -slash, autobot: sunstreaker, !fanfiction (english), *28 meme, decepticon: breakdown

Comments 8

__wilderness__ August 27 2010, 12:59:28 UTC

OOoooh... this I like. Sunstreaker is just utterly sadistic here (though I'm not sure that's the word I want) and Breakdown... so heartbreakingly vunerable...

naboru_narluin August 28 2010, 12:09:45 UTC

:D Thanks for reading and leaving feedback. *glomps*

*hehe* Yeah, Sunstreaker is a bastard, and I just want to hug Breakdown after this. v.v

I’m glad to hear you liked it. :)

caiusmajor August 27 2010, 16:35:59 UTC

Oh, very well done. Poor, confused Breakdown!

naboru_narluin August 28 2010, 12:13:12 UTC

*glomps* Thanks for reading. :D And so glad you liked it. ^^

I just want to hug Breakdown after this. *lol* Maybe Dead End or Wildrider can do that for me. *lol* ;)

mjfastlane August 28 2010, 07:14:41 UTC

I really, really, really like the way you write Sunstreaker. And you've done well with Breakdown too. Poor confused 'Con; an Autobot shouldn't be a worse individual than he is...and yet...

Wonderful work :)

naboru_narluin August 28 2010, 12:19:58 UTC

*glomps* :DDDD
Thanks for readig! *squee* And I'm still so very happy that you like this Sunstreaker. *lol* He's such a bastard! :p

And Breakdown... Awww, he's one of my favourite charas, but I'm a bastard, too, and I like writing him suffer. *is an arse* v.v

anonymous September 4 2010, 06:00:33 UTC

Wow I can't believe someone found my old Kink Meme prompt. I really enjoyed reading this it was great.

naboru_narluin September 20 2010, 18:42:20 UTC

OMG, sorry for the late answer. I was on holiday when I got the notification. ._.

Thank you so much for reading. :D I mean it. It is really cool that you found the fic (this prompt IS really old)... But I have to admit that I didn’t find the prompt. :p I read it by the time it got posted and I had this fic in mind since then. It just took a while until I wrote it and then until I edited it and was content with it. ._.

I’m even happier that you liked it. *squee* :D