NEGATIVE REVERSE

Mar 26, 2020 18:35


They piled in the car, arguing about something menial and stupid, no doubt.  however that was forgotten pretty damn fast as it became no consequence in comparison to what happened next.  Still dragging his last pointless point through the dirt, Bob lowered the shifter into reverse and gunned it without even the faintest of glances into the rearview ( Read more... )

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adoptedwriter March 28 2020, 10:20:26 UTC
Hilarious! Very descriptive too!

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halfshellvenus March 29 2020, 08:05:39 UTC
only to be ran over in a K-mart parking lot (that part happened).
Ah, you have such great, feckless characters in your stories.

In particular, dudes scrambling around getting into one piece of trouble after another, only to stop and really notice the disaster they've created, is one of the hallmarks of your stories.

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banana_galaxy March 29 2020, 20:25:29 UTC
Did not see that ending coming!

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tonithegreat March 30 2020, 01:02:00 UTC
You win for most unexpected negative reverse thus far! The Micro Mangler. A madcap series of events here for sure.

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rayaso March 30 2020, 16:24:32 UTC
So much fun! If you're going to run over someone, it's best if your victim is wanted for crimes against humanity. Usually, backing over people is not a public service.

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