16C Part 1

[mzyra]

Well here's the split first part of 16C.
Now to bed due to pain (and lateness), and hopefully OWBC writing tomorrow.

Comments

[lauriempress]

Jess, when you wake up, you'll need to fix the link. I tried to find it manually but couldn't.

[mzyra]

Fixed! My laptop's being weird about this stuff :/
Thanks for pointing it out ^.^
Now sleep *collapses*

[lauriempress]

It was a great update, but....those teens.

[scribal_goddess]

Oh, this is not going to end well, not at all... *Chews fingernails*

[katrisims]

[Spoiler (click to open)]
Yikes. This sounds like it isn't going to go well at all. *worries*

A bunch of teenagers trying to do something their fathers couldn't do, some of said fathers equipped with good fighting skills and all? And the kids' best plan being "let's give the evil guy one more victim, so maybe the aliens, whom we haven't actually ever seen, will do... well, something"? I get they aren't happy to sit around, but really, I can't even think of a way how this wouldn't go horribly wrong.

Also, I can't help but think that this situation is bringing out the worst in some of the teens. Sure, the quads were willing to help, that's why they are unconscious, but none of them has agreed to being used as a bait, a means to an end...

It's a good thing that Lydia and Victoria are aware that the kids might try to do something rash, at this point I can't but hope that they can keep them from actually doing it.


Excellent update once again!

[katmiesterk8]

......This isn't going to end well, is it?

Please Lydia and Victoria, do something so the teens don't do this monumentally rash/stupid plan. *crosses fingers*