I guess you broke my heart, and sometimes I think that's all it's there for

[mywholecry]

I'm reposting this here, since our secret identities have been revealed at fandomcommerce, and what better way to celebrate an upcoming Valentine's Day than disfunctional porn?

Title: Every Breath We Drew
Fandom: Harry Potter
Rating: NC17
Pairing(s): Remus/Sirius, Remus/Regulus, Sirius/Regulus
Word Count: 2,500
Warnings: Sex, angst, Blackcest, language,

Comments

[remuslives23]

That was gorgeous! I loved this:

"Do you want to know what sort of noises he makes? If he says your name?"
Something inside of Sirius snaps at that, and he shoves Regulus forward, listening to his back hit the wall. Regulus lets out a startled laugh, but there's fear beneath his eyes, like he's gotten too far into something and he's reconsidering. Their faces are too close, and he can feel warm, frantic breath near his jaw, and he doesn't know what he's doing.
"Don't hurt him." he whispers, finally, fingers digging into his shoulder. "I'll kill you if you hurt him."

Actually, I loved all of it! Particularly the above though (which made me tear up) and the changing POV's. Fantastic!

[mywholecry]

Thank you so much! The POVs were hard for me because I've never written Regulus before, so I'm glad it all worked together.

[leashy_bebes]

I loved this so much. Every single word of it. <3 Perfect.

[mywholecry]

Thank you! ♥

[kuro_nyoko]

This. Is. Amazing.
Totally adding to my memories.

[mywholecry]

I'm so glad you liked it!

[lshtic]

Ouch; I really did like this though, it flowed very well and was pretty. Sorry I don't have too much of a comment, but it did bring me out of my lurker mode, so that's got to mean something, doesn't it?

[mywholecry]

Any comment is appreciated, particularly lurker comments! Thank you for reading!

[snapmagic]

I usually don't go for fics w. Regulus, but I really liked this; I think you got the characters + their emotions just right.

[mywholecry]

This is actually the first time I've written Regulus, so I'm glad it worked out for you. Thanks for reading!