UraIshi AU Ch.20 (end)

[myuki_chan]

Title: Unravelling Threads of Fate
Rating: PG-13
Pairings: UraIshi
Summary: AU. Ishida has had a hard life. With the help of some friends, it finally looks like things are going to work out. When he meets a bizarre and cheerful man named Urahara Kisuke, the two are inexplicably drawn to each other. But when Ishida discovers the truth about Urahara

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Re: For once, I'm on time! XD

[myuki_chan]

You are on time! :D

Ahaha, yes I have seen that page! Battle of the plushies? XD

I know, when I finished writing, I stopped and went, "... there was no Isshin in there. D:" but I couldn't figure out a way to put him in. lol

Aw, thank you so much! ♥ I'm glad you think their characterization was good - that always worried me a little. XD

Hee! The cover is entirely my beta's work. And we made sure the FST could all fit on a CD... because I wanted to burn myself a copy. lol

[lily22]

What it's over?! Omg. I don't even know if I read the previous chapter! *runs off to do so*

[lily22]

aaaaaah yaaay! I realized that I'd actually missed out on the past few chapters, and read them all just now, in like this huge, angst-filled chunk. It really amuses me that Urahara gave Ishida his bracelet and Ishida gave Urahara his striped hat. I don't remember if you ever told us that his old hat was actually black but I was very surprised when it turned out that wasn't his striped hat after all! XDXD

Also, yay for happy endings! I like how everything wraps up so perfectly, and they finally see each other again where they first met. :)

By the way, your Isshin a few chapters back was incredibly cute. "I'm keeping your pager number, though." I can't believe cigarette boxes really say that in Japan! XDXD

[myuki_chan]

LOL LILY XD

Ahaha, I actually did when Ishida first met Urahara but I think people are so used to default-ing his hat as striped that they just kind of skimmed over that fact. XD

Yes, happy endings! I tried to make sure I left nothing unanswered. XD There're probably still things I missed, but the major things are all tied up.

Heehee, thank you~ And yes, apparently they do! I had to stop and laugh to myself after reading it. XD

[fanfictionaxis]

WOW! What an adventure we went on with the pair!
Great . . . no wrong word to use here. Fab work? Nah, oh! I have it! Delicious writing! Yeah, that sounds good. This story just drools delicious, hot, steamy and downright sexy!
Now I wonder how many hours it will take to read the entire story. I may have to try that and see how many hours it will be when I have nothing to do so I can devote my full attention to it. But it will be worth it reading it in it's entirety.
But I will be recommending this fine story to all my friends, myuki chan. You are a great writer, everyone here agrees with me.
Now I wonder what will be happening next with this couple. I wonder if there is any other stories that is droolworthy like this one is. Will have to check LJ communities and the archive sites.
Have you thought of posting it on Adultfanfiction.net? If you do, I'm sure people will be leaving reviews upon reviews upon reviews on this fine story!
Thank you, thank you so much for posting this story and allowing us the honor of reading it. Thank you!

[myuki_chan]

Thank you so much. ♥

There's actually the community uraishi that lily22 and I started. XD It's mostly just... my stuff there, but there are a few things written by other people! lol (If you find any fics that aren't at that comm, please let me know. XD)

I considered it, but I'm not sure if it's "adult" enough? If you think it'd fit in there, I'll go post it. XD

[fanfictionaxis]

I think I will join up to read more great stories from the authors there.
If you want to spice up the love scene a bit more you can post it on AFF, they do have just an Adult rating there which is sort of like PG13 to everyone else.

[myuki_chan]

I don't know - that scene was hard enough for me, I don't know if I can do any more to it. LOL

[crystal_sun396]

YES OHMYGOSHYES YES YESYESYES AKSLGA;SIDJOFIAKSNF-LKD!!!!! HAHAHAHA YAAAY YAYAYAY HOOORAY!!! :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

I LOVE THIS ENDING. URAHARA IS A BRILLIANT CRAZYMAN AND ISHIDA IS TOTALLY HIS MATCH! CONFESSING!RYUUKEN WAS JUST RIGHT. YORUICHI AS A LAWYER. RUKIA AND ICHIGO FIGHT SO CUTELY. URAISHI MAKES ME SQUUUEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

I really liked your description of the studio too. Haha Mayuri that idiot letting his old boss run around on a contract. XD I'm glad Urahara got 'im, but I'm also glad you left him with Nemu in the end. Sad for her, but it fits with her character.

Yes! for not moping! Yes! for sneaky loophole! YES! for the wonderful ending (YAAAAY) to a beautiful AU. YesyesYES!! Myuki. YOU TOTALLY WIN AT EVERYTHING! XDXDXD

[myuki_chan]

ROFL XDXDXD

I love you. You're awesome. XD

Mayuri got too ahead of himself :3 Thought he found Urahara's weakness but never considered that he'd still be so clever. XD

Yes, no moping! Tried to show that Ishida's grown up a bit. :D THANK YOU CRISSY~~ ♥

HI

[reeksakapanther]

I just finished your story and found it to be very interesting.BTW Beth sent me here, she's my sister and I love her for bringing me to this great story.

There are no complaints, no issues with the story. I found nothing wrong with it.

I just love it though the pairing is one I didn't think of... Huggles to you and it should be nominated for an award.

If I could, I would give you a perfect score.

goes off to place Renji in some other messed up smut situation, seeing that Toushirou is currently busy

Re: HI

[myuki_chan]

Thank you so much for your kind words! :D

Haha, I think a lot of people haven't ever considered this pairing. XD But it's a fun one!

I'm glad you enjoyed it - and thank you again! ♥