Comments | mythverdandi: Completing the Victory

mythverdandi

Completing the Victory - PG

Feb 26, 2006 00:23

Title: Completing the Victory
Fandom: Doctor Who
Rating: PG
Summary: fanfic100 prompt 88 - school. Rose meets an old...'friend'.

( Chantelle Billing had not seen Rose Tyler since she’d left school with that degenerate boyfriend of hers… )

doctor who, fanfic 100, 9/rose/jack, humour

Comments 20

dune_drd February 26 2006, 11:14:39 UTC

That was great, I almost feel sorry Chantelle, after all I feel much the same envy every time I see Rose ^^

mythverdandi February 26 2006, 12:15:25 UTC

Heehee, who doesn't? I tried to make Chantelle more central, but then Jack and the Doctor appeared and those three sort of...took over. You can't control them!

pinkmarshmello February 26 2006, 11:37:42 UTC

lol Great story. I hate people like Chantelle, I loved the story though.

mythverdandi February 26 2006, 12:16:14 UTC

It's unfortunate that I know a lot of people like Chantelle. *le sigh* Glad you liked it though!

kahvi February 26 2006, 12:16:32 UTC

It occurred to her that Rose was probably sleeping with one of them, though that thought wasn’t as much of a consolation as she’d hoped.

Bwahahah! Nice one.

I enjoyed this; nice interaction between the trio - absolutely in character. I could see this happening. :)

mythverdandi February 26 2006, 12:21:11 UTC

Thank you! They sort of took over once I got all three of them in the same place. It took a lot to get them to shut up so Chantellt could get a word in edgeways!

kahvi February 26 2006, 12:28:34 UTC

Heheh... Yeah, I know that feeling. They take on a life of their own, don't they? I've not written for this fandom (yet), but it happens to me in others.

mythverdandi February 26 2006, 20:31:02 UTC

Doesn't happen to me often, but when it does it's always nice. :)

zortified February 26 2006, 16:14:53 UTC

Heee! Loved it.

“Not really.” Rose said. “But we keep ending up there anyway.”

This was my favorite line, really. Snerk.

mythverdandi February 26 2006, 20:19:34 UTC

Heehee, it's true though, isn't it? I bet they end up in Cardiff a few more times next series too.

deadflowerss February 26 2006, 19:30:28 UTC

That was fantastic,I really enjoyed the interaction between the trio.

Want to go do something that’ll make her even more wildly jealous?” Jack asked, as the Doctor brushed his thumb over the back of her hand, making her shiver slightly and grin.

That was my favorite line,I loved the Doctor brushing his thumb over the back of her hand!

mythverdandi February 26 2006, 20:23:25 UTC

Thank you! I'm am pleased with the way they came out in this. They just sort of wrote themselves, which must mean I'm getting better at it. :D