Comments | mystic_blue17: Pillow Talk of First Dates

mystic_blue17

Pillow Talk of First Dates

Feb 09, 2011 23:20

Sometime between round two and drifting off to sleep, Oliver said to her. “So this didn’t turn out the way I thought it would.”

She arched her eyebrow at her. “Really? Because this was exactly how I thought we would spend the night.”

“This was a given.” he gestured between themselves in their undressed state. His eyes glinted mischievously at her ( Read more... )

chloe, collateral, oliver, season 10, oneshot, chlollie, fanfiction, pillow talk

Comments 11

iluvaqt February 10 2011, 04:33:16 UTC

Very sweet and I loved them virtually going through their date. Romantic and sassy. Poor Chlo, although I don't think she'd be mourning the apartment that much. Living in the Clocktower with Oliver would save her the killer commute. :D

mystic_blue17 February 10 2011, 04:45:01 UTC

Damn girl you quick. I didn't even post it on Chlollie yet. We 'll talk more but I just had to say DAMN and I love it.

ms_mojo_risin71 February 10 2011, 05:00:35 UTC

AWW...I really loved this!! Especially how they talked about the perfect date and Chloe reassuring Oliver that she doesn't need all that stuff b/c she has him! So Cute!! LOVED IT!

sxymami0909 February 10 2011, 05:02:12 UTC

Aww hun this was really awesome! I completely loved it. You wrote them so well here! I can't wait until Friday :-D

nienna87 February 10 2011, 05:09:17 UTC

I liked it :) Very sweet and cute. I love that they talk about their date and what they want to do. Very romantic...especially when Chloe told him she didn't need all the fancy stuff, just being with him is enough. Loved it!

serafina19 February 10 2011, 05:23:10 UTC

*chuckle* This was so cute. The little play-by-play, the reassurance, and the understanding was well played.

As a side note, I find that inconsistency is just a shorter way of saying how you're pushing your comfort zone. This turned out well.