Smallville countdown 1: Lonely Traveler

Feb 03, 2011 00:20

“Take it Chloe you can’t be here right now.”

“Where will I go?”

“That is for you to decide.”

In her heart, she knew that anywhere with Oliver was where she wanted to be. There was one place that she knew of. She closed her eyes and hoped that the transition would be as easy.

“Whoa.” When she opened her eyes, she found herself in the middle ( Read more... )

chloe, oliver, oneshot, smallville countdown, chlollie, angst, pandora, future, season 9, au

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renka23 February 3 2011, 08:49:03 UTC
Heeey! :)

I really like your idea here. :D

It's such beautiful and sad moments there when she came in and had to leave.

Wonderful. And oh, in the universe I have for them (well, in my mind, at least), Chlollie is ALWAYS and FOREVER the endgame. <3

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tenshinrtaiga February 3 2011, 09:01:00 UTC
See, fics like these make me just want to... clone Chloe. I'd clone her and just send her on through to the worlds without her because, seriously? A world without Chloe- a world where Oliver doesn't have her- just shouldn't exist.

Loved the fic, ps. In case my rant about the unfairness of your FICTIONAL world wasn't clue enough.

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iluvaqt February 3 2011, 09:31:52 UTC
I'm choking back tears, it wasn't fair for her to do that to him, but at the same time he got a short of closure he never go with his Chloe.

After all, it was “But there was never the right time. You had to lead and I was your solider." :(

Beautiful short. I hope the rest of the ten are all snippets of Chloe trying to fill the void in her heart that her forced separation from Oliver is giving her.

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brittany2922 February 3 2011, 14:14:23 UTC
Awww such a sweet and heartbreaking fic. You did great with this and I can't wait to read more!

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saurina February 4 2011, 19:50:20 UTC
Heyy hun

I'm sorry I haven't commented on any of your stories yet, but I have had some crazy ass work hours for the last couple of days and tomorrow is yet another one, but rest asure I WILL get to them all later tonight when I've finished my last Chlollie meme post..:)))

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