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fic : Looking At Your Damn Shoes

Jan 14, 2008 09:35

Title: Looking At Your Damn Shoes
Pairing: AJ/Nick
Summary: Nick realizes the one he views as perfection actually prefers imperfection
Dedication: to inahurricane because, quote, "There is not enough AJ/Nick in the world!"
Warnings: Language, unfulfilled masturbation
Word Count: 2,563 DudeI started this in a notebook this morning while waiting for the bus with ( Read more... )

my fiction, aj/nick

Comments 6

inahurricane January 14 2008, 19:25:35 UTC

Oh God, this was super. The title had me squeeing before I even started reading. (I have a bit of a shoe fetish lol). I will comment more later with all my favorite parts; I have many ;)

mysoulunfolding January 14 2008, 19:42:05 UTC

Yay!

*whispers* Part two is already in the works... *glares*

inahurricane January 15 2008, 07:07:25 UTC

After buying his new house and dragging Nick and Howie along on a shopping spree to fill his house with necessities, AJ had told them he didn't know how to do anything in the kitchen except make coffee and have sex.
I laughed out loud at that part, and the following section where Nick was all curious as to how to go about it lol

The paragraph about how Nick needed to work extra hard was adorable. Especially He had learned how to play the piano, the drums, and the guitar, but it usually took several drinks before he was comfortable enough with his talent to actually play. I was aww-ing all throughout it :D

As he fumbled to keep his coffee from spilling, he heard AJ mutter, "I like your fuzz."

"Huh?" Nick secured his hold on the coffee before looking to the other man.

"What?" AJ's face was pure innocence.

"You like my fuzz?"

"Well, yeah..."

Nick couldn't help his grin. "Yeah? What if I shave?"

"Then, fucking-duh, I'll be mad."

Nick's grin widened. "I wasn't aware that your state of happiness relied on my facial hair--"Hands ( ... )

mysoulunfolding January 15 2008, 12:37:34 UTC

Eeee! You really liked it! *is glad*

Facial hair! NICK'S facial hair! AJ liking it!

How could AJ not like it?? Nick's facial hair is possibly one of the sexiest things in the world aside from AJ's!

my brain has turned to mush. I need part 2!

Part 2 is being written now. As long as the kid stays in bed till 10:30 like she did yesterday, it will be finished soon. *grins*

cynkaba January 15 2008, 04:25:10 UTC

Wow, that was really good. You had me hooked from the get-go and I'm pretty picky when it comes to my fiction. I'll definitely check out Part 2.

mysoulunfolding January 15 2008, 12:40:00 UTC

Aww thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it! :) Part 2 will be up soon.