*gasp* I wrote!

[mysoulunfolding]

And I even wrote *double gasp* some slash!

Title:Touch the Sky (tentative title, may change. But I think I like that...)
Paring: AJ/Justin (TimberBone!)
Summary: Wherein AJ's not a recovering alcoholic (because it's easier on me that way), Justin's an egotistical ass (at first), AJ is heartbroken and in need of love and maybe, just maybe, Justin

Comments

[sweet_sugarplum]

I don't think that I'm the one that's supposed to comment on Slash fiction. Hell, I don't even understand all the terminology related to it. But, AJ's angst is real. The poor, pitiful boy. Brian just ran into that closet screaming, huh?

[mysoulunfolding]

*snickers* Yes, he did... And thank you, Plumsie.

[zombeezle]

Now this says a lot coming from me I think...simply because even though I ADORE the sparkly fandom, I very rarely read fiction ( I mean RARELY ). But I remember Bone telling me about you working on this...and I believe I sent some links for help.

Anyway, I really think you did an amazin job with the open. Really makes you see what AJ and Brian had and how much AJ is aching.

So far I feel you're getting Justin pretty well on the nose. Playful, but like he's the absolute shit. It's hard to pull off...and sometimes I think I fuck it up ha. But you're doing marvelous and I can't wait to read the rest.

[mysoulunfolding]

Dude, thanks so much! I had no idea how Justin fans would take this, and fretted quite a bit before I clicked on 'post'. (I don't really consider myself a fan of Justin, more like I think he's hot and want to have his babies really enjoy looking at him and listening to his music. *cough*

Really makes you see waht AJ and Brian had and how much AJ is aching.

That's another thing I was worried about. I really wanted readers to feel AJ's pain, and hoped I was getting the fact that he was head over heels in love with Brian out in the open.

And, I wrote Justin as I see him. A playful little shit. ;-) Thanks again!

[zombeezle]

(I don't really consider myself a fan of Justin, more like I think he's hot and want to have his babies really enjoy looking at him and listening to his music. *cough*

Do not deny the JT. I let him in and I lick him up and down daily....in my head. ha. Much like JC gorgeous men deserve their true glory mmmmhmmmm

[mysoulunfolding]

I am not denying him, honest. *holds hands up to cover growing nose* I let him in as much as I possibly can. *shifty eyes*

See? I even think he's awesome. ;)

[duoshinigami]

I have been waiting for this for forever! And now the first chapter is here! In its completed glory! *dances* *boogies* *gets down*

And I love it! Though my heart has an extremely hard time with angst I still loved it. AJ's pain is so real and tangible. If I weren't so interested in him and Justin getting it on I would be begging you to have AJ and Brian get back together. I'm stronger then that though..barely.

You did an AWESEOME job on Justin. He made me laugh my ass off.

"Whoever doesn’t can kiss my ass. If they have the stamina to wait in line." A self-satisfied smirk touched Justin's lips.

That is literary gold! Gold I tell you!! I cannot wiat to see what the next chapter holds. Don't keep me hanging Sweet Thang!

Again...LOVE IT!

[mysoulunfolding]

*points to icon* That's what I'm going to use from now on, when you tell me how wonderful I write something. ;)

If I weren't so interested in him and Justin getting it on I would be begging you to have AJ and Brian get back together. I'm stronger then that though..barely.

So... You want me to have AJ tell Justin to kiss his ass and go crawling on his hands and knees to Brian, right? *bats eyelashes sweetly*

*giggles* I knew you'd like that line!

[duoshinigami]

That icon is super sweet! *shimmies*

[bethestage]

Ooh I haven't read slash in forever... I like, but I want more! ;o)

*waves* Random lj hopping... found you through Becky. :o)

[mysoulunfolding]

*icon love!*

I'm working as hard as I can on it! ;)

*waves back* Welcome to my insane palace. And Becky is awesome! :)