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ralst February 12 2008, 12:02:32 UTC
This was really good. I do hope you consider writing a sequel.

Just one thing, did Sarah go to college? She had John at 18 so I thought she'd have been too young?

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mysensitiveside February 12 2008, 17:55:22 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! And yeah, I'm definitely considering it.

Oops. I've never seen the movies, so I'm not totally clear on the back-story. It does make sense that Sarah would be too young to have been through college and also have a 15-year-old son. I didn't really think about it. I guess I'll edit this and change the "college" references to "high school." Thanks!

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aquila1nz February 12 2008, 21:24:25 UTC
I'm also having a hard time getting my head around a world where Sarah still has a college or highschool yearbook. Always on the move, living off the grid and abandoning possessions to go on the run again doesn't seem conducive to holding onto bulkier keepsakes.

Neat story though, and I hope you'll do more.

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mysensitiveside February 13 2008, 00:36:11 UTC
Yeah, certainly not a strong-point of my story. I guess I sort of saw it as something that could have been buried in a box of miscellaneous stuff that doesn't even get unpacked and re-packed, necessarily, but does contain some things that might be needed at some point, so the yearbook simply got taken along for the ride too, even though Sarah didn't even realize it was still there. But yeah, a certain amount of suspension of disbelief is probably required for this. Sorry about that.

I'm glad you liked it ok anyway!

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olli01a February 12 2008, 15:27:30 UTC
Awesome. Any chance for a sequel?

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mysensitiveside February 12 2008, 17:57:12 UTC
Thanks! And yep, there's about a 75% chance that I'll write a sequel (it depends on how much free time I have and whether or not I actually think of something to write).

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olli01a February 13 2008, 15:19:01 UTC
I can understand you. It seems you have never the time to write... *sigh*

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mysensitiveside February 13 2008, 00:38:45 UTC
I'm glad you liked it! Sarah definitely has conflicting emotions when it comes to Cameron, which is one of the things that I really like about this pairing.

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wolfemeister February 12 2008, 20:48:05 UTC
Wow smexy.
At first I wasn't into this pairing but more and more it's working for me.
I just checked and Sarah Connor was at college working as a waitress in T1 so your more or less ok. I think she was 20ish when T1 took place.
The Leana Headley is only 34 so she is playing someone slightly older.
Linda Hamilton was 28 when she played Sarah so I really think you're safe.

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mysensitiveside February 13 2008, 00:43:54 UTC
I agree that this is a tricky pairing, but I'm glad it's growing on you.

Thanks so much for all the research! (Although I probably should have done it on my own before posting the story in the first place...oh well.) Ok, so I'm going to go with the idea that Sarah did go to college at some point, but may or may not have actually graduated, so I'm going to once again edit accordingly.

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wolfemeister February 12 2008, 20:49:37 UTC
PS I got distracted doing research but this was really good. I too hope you write more. Yummy

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mysensitiveside February 13 2008, 00:46:48 UTC
Thanks muchly! :)

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