U is for Up against a wall... Giving In (SCC)

Jul 18, 2009 16:45

Title: Giving In
Disclaimer: Characters are not mine.
Fandom: Sarah Connor Chronicles
Pairing: Sarah/Cameron
Rating: PG-13?
Summary: Any resistance she’d felt was long gone.
Author's Note: Based on the prompt “U is for Up against a wall.” Written for wolfemeister.

U is for Up against a wall )

pairing: sarah/cameron, fic: sarah connor chronicles, fanfiction, fandom: sarah connor chronicles, international day of femslash

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dhamphir July 18 2009, 21:20:59 UTC
Nice capture of Sarah's personality - refusing to give in, resenting it when she does. And even though she's does give in, knowing it's symbolic (and perhaps not so symbolic) of the end. Well done.

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mysensitiveside July 21 2009, 12:22:16 UTC
Thanks! Sarah's never one to give in easily, and I can see her not quite forgiving herself for doing so in this case. Thanks for commenting! :)

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mysensitiveside July 21 2009, 12:23:45 UTC
Heh. She's too busy worrying about everyone else to feel ok doing something for herself. Good thing Cameron's just so impossible to resist. ;)

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inspectorboxer July 18 2009, 21:43:03 UTC
Both sexy and thought provoking all in the same short scene. I'm impressed. ;) The moment feels like both a victory and a defeat at the same time. Nicely done!

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mysensitiveside July 21 2009, 12:27:42 UTC
Heh. Well I'm flattered to have impressed you! :) That last line was one of those that sort of just came out without planning, but that I really liked once it was written. And yeah, I do see Sarah feeling incredibly conflicted about a moment like this.

Glad you liked this!

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olli01a August 1 2009, 13:30:06 UTC
I like how you describe Sarah's inner conflict. But I'm sure in the end mankind will not come to the end Sarah has in mind...

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mysensitiveside August 20 2009, 04:00:38 UTC
Thanks, glad you liked this one! :)

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dariclone August 21 2009, 23:57:32 UTC
Wonderful. I loved the sexual tension between Sarah and Cameron.

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mysensitiveside August 29 2009, 02:40:57 UTC
Thanks so much! :)

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