The New World - Part 3

Jun 23, 2009 22:53

While Myra’s week was relatively uneventful, The Shadow spent restless nights and long days working diligently on many fronts. He was not only keeping an eye on the organized rings in NYC, but maintaining pressure on the European front, investigating the connections of a few potentially corrupt officials, while keeping the Bureau off of Myra’s ( Read more... )

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evillurks June 24 2009, 22:47:31 UTC
((White tigers! I particularly like that entire last line. That's wonderful!
I appreciate how much work you put into the part with The Shadow, too, caught in trying to handle the various plots around him.))

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myra_reldon June 24 2009, 23:40:43 UTC
((Heh, that name and line were probably the hardest part to write in this story so far.
He's always so hip-deep in everything around him, I couldn't see Myra's problem as the only thing on his plate.
Hopefully things are moving along swiftly enough.))

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evillurks June 25 2009, 00:12:01 UTC
((I think it ties in what they're trying to do in changing history very nicely. It's definitely progressing quickly.))

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