[LJ Idol] SCI, "Rewrite"

[mymisguided]

Prompt: What's Missing?
Author's Notes: Fiction. I hope you enjoy.

Comments

[kathrynrose]

Love!

My favorite line: "Lunchboxes sat unpacked, juice drinks remained unopened, bananas waited unpeeled in trembling hands."

[mymisguided]

Thank you! =D I'm glad you enjoyed it!

(And of course in a story about bringing stories to life the storytelling itself has to have some level of personification, yes? =D)

Thanks for commenting!

[michikatinski]

Love love LOVE and I want to read more just as soon as you can write it. I'm sitting here, sandwich poised at my mouth, waiting for more of your words to chew on. :-D

[mymisguided]

Aw, thank you! I'm filled with warm fuzzies now =D

I will definitely at some point finish this story (probably not for Idol though, but who knows?) and when I do, I'll let you know. It's one of my favorite story ideas, and it was such fun to write, so it's gonna happen. Eventually. xD

Thanks so much for taking the time to comment, it's much appreciated! I'm glad you enjoyed the story!

[jem0000000]

Both beautiful and spooky. It's an intriguing premise, and well written. :)

[mymisguided]

Thank you for taking the time to comment! =) I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[jem0000000]

You're welcome. :)

[muchtooarrogant]

Great story! I loved the way you told this, Rebecca moving from disbelief, to fear, and then finally acceptance.

Dan

[mymisguided]

Thank you! =D I'm glad you enjoyed it! It's a ghost story that's more about the girl than the ghost, and I'm glad that her character and emotions stood out and worked for you.

Thanks again for commenting! It feels good to be (sort-of) back! =)

[ravenshrinkery]

Nice :). You really painted the scene well with your words.

[mymisguided]

Thank you! =) I'm glad you enjoyed it!