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Fic: Primatech 815 - Ch. 3

Sep 02, 2009 19:20

Title: Primatech 815
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes (Crossover with Lost)
Characters: Ando, Bennet, Claire, Claude, Hiro, Isaac, Peter, Matt, Micah, Mohinder, Niki, Simone, Sylar (more to come)
Rating: R
Summary: A plane crash unites a group of strangers.
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes or Lost.
Warnings: AU, Violence, Action/Adventure, Drug use, Het, ( Read more... )

character: micah, character: isaac, character: claire, character: niki, genre: au, genre: angst, rating: r, genre: crossover, character: ando, character: hiro, character: peter, fic

Comments 10

greyelveneyes September 3 2009, 01:36:57 UTC

This is such an interesting concept! I've never seen Lost, but I absolutely love what you've done with these characters in that universe. ♥

I look forward to seeing where this story goes! :D

starrdust411 September 3 2009, 02:11:17 UTC

Oh I totally recommend you pick up the first season of Lost. It's a great show.

I'm glad you're liking my fic so far. Thanks for reading :)

fashion_facist September 3 2009, 04:04:28 UTC

I don't usually read WIP's... because I am QUITE impatient, but I am loving this so far! I can't see what happens next, Especially with Mohinder and Sylar :)

themadbutterfly September 3 2009, 07:18:34 UTC

Oh man! we are totally alike in the ways of not usally reading WIP until its completed b/c i am impatient as hell too. But i love this story, dear author, and cannot wait for the next installment!!!

starrdust411 September 3 2009, 16:13:07 UTC

LOL not sure when the next chapter will be up, but hopefully soon :)

starrdust411 September 3 2009, 16:10:29 UTC

First of all, super icon love! Second, I'm glad you made an exception for my story. I hope I can live up to your expectations. :D

levitatethis September 3 2009, 16:10:06 UTC

I know you had mentioned the trouble with trying to veer this more into a "Heroes" fold and away from what we know on "Lost" so I'm quite happy to see a new chapter up. I think it works to keep using "Lost" as a base on which to build your own story so I'm interested to see how you expand on this concept, making the characters more of their own and their relationships/interactions very distinct.

Looking forward to what comes next!

starrdust411 September 3 2009, 16:40:19 UTC

It is pretty hard still. I've got a bunch of chapters already written, but I'm going to do a massive re-write on them because a lot of the Heroes characters sound out of character :( It's frustrating, but the idea for this story is too fun to give up on.

Hopefully I'll get the next chapter fixed up enough to post it soon :)

aurilly September 6 2009, 03:52:17 UTC

This continues to be fabulous! The dynamic between Sylar and Mohinder is so intriguing, and seems to drift furthest from Lost, so I'm on my toes. I love how you have Mohinder as the practical-type Sayid figure (love 'em both!!!!). Peter is so adorable (and less rage-inducing than Jack). I'm enjoying this hugely and can't wait for the next part. :)

starrdust411 September 6 2009, 04:28:29 UTC

Yeah, I definitely wanted to have a unique storyline develop right off the bat in order to make way for more later on :) I'm glad you liked Mohinder becoming Sayid, I didn't want it to seem too forced, just something that would be unique to this version of Mo and add a bit of mystery to him. I don't mind Jack as a character, but I can't see Peter being as aggressive or as cold as him (because there certainly are times when Jack is just plain cold :( ).

Thank you for reading. Hopefully more will come soon :D