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Fic: Memories

Aug 20, 2009 01:34

Title: Memories
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Sylar/Mohinder, Peter/Claude
Rating: R
Summary: Mohinder remembers the past as Peter's big day arrives. (Sequel to "Fathers", "Babysitting", and "Leaving")
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes.
Warnings: Slash, AU, Mpreg, spoilers for season 3

( Besides, she wouldn't be here if it wasn't for you. )

character: claude, genre: au, genre: angst, rating: r, mohinder plus powers, character: molly, character: matt, character: peter, fic, character: angela

Comments 10

themadbutterfly August 20 2009, 10:02:49 UTC

ooh! i hope Mohinder does consider it! I love this little arc you have going on.

starrdust411 August 20 2009, 15:53:02 UTC

Thank you, although this is definitely the end. I just wanted to get this out of the way so that I could focus on my Lost crossover (and school, which starts next week :-/ )

zagethe August 20 2009, 16:08:48 UTC

You know what makes this story above average is attention to characterization. As implausible as the plot may be you have Sylar talking about how he considers reproduction part of his evolutionary imperative and that is just SO Sylar. He still retains what is basically "him". Mohinder is also spot-on but I think Sylar is definitely the harder voice to capture. Well done.

starrdust411 August 20 2009, 16:47:06 UTC

Thank you. The hardest part of any fanfic for me is keeping the characters true to themselves and not just charactures of charactures that I've read in other stories. I sort of came up with the concept of a mpreg for this couple because of Sylar's belief that he is the next step in evolution. You can't be the next step if you don't reproduce and I can't see Sylar impregnant just anyone for the sake of passing on his DNA. (It's sort of why when I write from Sylar's perspective he uses terms like "offspring" and "spawn" when talking about his son.)

zingala August 27 2009, 04:05:35 UTC

Great addition to your series. You really make this "world" work.:-)

starrdust411 August 28 2009, 02:58:52 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

wendy_bird September 5 2009, 17:28:07 UTC

This is an amazing story and world. Great job. :)

starrdust411 September 5 2009, 18:02:29 UTC

Icon love! I adore Peter Pan :D

Thank you for reading :)

wendy_bird September 6 2009, 04:57:34 UTC

Peter Pan has been my favorite book since I was a kid. The idea of never growing old and remaining with the lost boys forever really appealed (or, rather, appeals) to me.

Thank *you* for writing!

game_byrd August 15 2010, 04:08:13 UTC

That's awesome. This story gets a lot better when one reads the rest of it!

And it was interesting to see that my theory that Peter got the mpreg from Sylar was wrong, and he actually got it from Mohinder.

I'm still waiting to see if "two split lips and a black eye" equate to rape or just ridiculously rough sex.