Fic: Primatech 815 - Ch. 1

[starrdust411]

Title: Primatech 815
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes (Crossover with Lost)
Characters: Ando, Bennet, Claire, Claude, Hiro, Isaac, Peter, Matt, Micah, Mohinder, Niki, Simone, Sylar (more to come)
Rating: R
Summary: A plane crash unites a group of strangers.
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes or Lost.
Warnings: AU, Violence, Action/Adventure, Drug use, Het,

Comments

[themadbutterfly]

I really enjoyed this story and hope you'll update soon. I don't think I've seen a Lost cross over yet but I thought you did well with the first chapter.

[starrdust411]

LOL, yeah I haven't seen one either so that was one of the things that inspired me to write this story. I have the first five chapters written already, but they all still need to be spell checked and read over and over before I'll post them. :)

[levitatethis]

I'm excited about a Heroes/Lost crossover, especially one involving so many of the characters. Can't wait to see where you take this!

[starrdust411]

Yeah, I'm definitely going to try to work in as many characters as possible. Right now, I'm mostly using the cast of season 1 (since I personally thought that was the best), but expect to see people from later in the series make an appearance.

[themadbutterfly]

thats good ... since i've only seen season 1. wait, more people get on the island? i better jump back on the Lost wagon and catch up.

[starrdust411]

You definitely should continue with Lost since in my personal opinion it's a much better show than Heroes. I won't say much about the possibility of more characters coming into play, but remember, Lost makes great use of flashbacks. That's all I'm going to say :P

[aurilly]

Yay! All I ever want is a Heroes/Lost crossover so this made my day.

I loved all the parallels that you thought of--Hiro/Ando as Sun/Jin, Niki/Micah like Michael/Walt, Peter as Jack (sooooooo, on point), Isaac as a possible Charlie-type junkie (?)...

It's also really refreshing to see well-missd season one characters like Niki and Simone and Isaac and Eden. I can't wait to see where you take this, and what is up with Mohinder.

[starrdust411]

Yeah, I always thought it was a big mistake for the writers to let those characters go. But that's the great thing about this story, I don't have to worry about whose still alive or still apart of the show. Since this is an AU, I can throw in characters from any old period and make use of them :D

[scarlet_paire]

So, well, this is the first time I read anything about Lost -- I kind of know the main plotline, but I've never watched a single episode. And, still, I really liked it -- you did a good job so far! Peter and Claire's interaction is pretty much in character, and you portrayed everyone very well... except for Isaac. I don't mean to flame or anything, and, of course, this is your interpretation of the characters and not mine, but... well, Isaac loved Simone. He screwed up all kinds of bad, but he did care for her a lot -- more than Peter did, I believe. Isaac was destroyed by Simone's death, and, Peter -- well, quoting someone I've heard I don't really know where, you'd think it was the cockroach of his neighbor's apartment who was killed, by his reaction. And, by his behavior so far, it's like Isaac doesn't care, and I didn't really liked it. It's the only complaint I have; in truth, I'm really anxious for the next chapter. And I bet Mohinder and Audrey were after Sylar in the plane! \o\ XD Can't wait to see Sylar's first appearance.

[scarlet_paire]

I've just noticed how many times I've repeated the word "really" on that review... I'm sorry for my poor English! U___U

[starrdust411]

First of all, I highly recommend that you watch Lost. It's a really good show with an incredibly talented cast and amazing writing. Obviously my fic is not going to do the plot justice, because I'm twisting and molding things to fit my image (and I don't have professional writing experience :P), but I believe ABC.com had the entire series online (unfortunately it's only available for US citizens, but I'm sure you can rent it or download episodes somewhere).

Second, you have to keep in mind that everything right now is pretty much being told from Peter's point of view. In the next chapter, we'll get some stuff from Isaac's view point as well as Claire, Mohinder, and lots of others as the story progresses. Because that's what Lost is about, studying a character's interaction with their situation/environment/other characters and slowly revealing what their motivation is for doing things and just why they are the way they are.

Like right now, Isaac seems like a bad boyfriend because Peter sees him as a bad boyfriend. Simone is having

[scarlet_paire]

I'll probably go for Lost after I stop watching Monk -- I'm getting up to date so I can watch the eighth season. And what you said makes sense; I didn't stop to consider that Peter's POV is Peter's interpretation of the characters. Sorry for the complaint, then. And Peter doesn't have that much luck with his relationships -- the first girl he dated got killed by her ex-boyfriend because he (Peter) was a complete idiot, and he forgot the second girl he dated in an apocalyptic future! O.O It's like an icon I've saw once, they should make an insurance scheme for Nathan and Peter's love interests. XD

[hurricanine]

Hmm. I have seen this posted, and I am curious and want to read.

But, I have not seen Lost and don't have time to pick up a new fandom right now.

Do I need to have seen Lost to understand this fic? Are there potential Lost spoilers, on the off-chance I clear something out of my schedule to watch this? :D

[starrdust411]

Unfortunately, there are major spoliers for Lost in this fic. So I wouldn't recommend reading unless you've finished season 1 of Lost. :)

[hurricanine]

Hmm. Well, it's on my list. With... seventeen other shows/fandoms. XD Maybe some day...