Saint Sebastian 3b/?

[doctor_caduceus]

Title: Saint Sebastian Part 3b/?.
Author: Doc C.
Characters/Pairings: Gabriel/Mohinder, Virginia, Chandra, others may be added
Rating: An equivalent to NC-17 that isn't copyrighted this chapter- WHICH WE FINALLY HIT HERE.
Genre: AU Romance Suspense Comedic Fluff? Will eventually evolve into suspense and angst?
Wordcount: 2,850
Spoilers: Season 1

Comments

[speccygeekgrrl]

Oh my god, Chandra is such a magnificent bastard. xD I love the contrast between their parents, how warm and accepting Virginia is and how cold and indifferent and mean Chandra is... and still Mohinder's such a wonderfully tender person, and Gabriel's nervous and self-conscious, all despite their parents.

I adore Mohinder calling Gabriel "sweetheart", and how he's so constantly reassuring, and the freaking priest outfit ejhaflkjdhlkajhd

and having Gabriel watch them in the mirror, that's delicious AND sweet at the same time.

♥

[doctor_caduceus]

I never liked Chandra, and always thought Sylar did Mohinder a bit of a favor.

Thank you!

[shimmeree]

LMFAO...oh my god, I was not expecting that ending. Ew, Chandra. Srsly. lol

The rest of it: BRILLIANT! I love how you didn't shy away from the sex, because you did a fantastic job. XD

[doctor_caduceus]

Whew. Some of y'all know how I am with sex scenes- I never know if I'm being explicit enough, so... so yay. :)

Thank you darlin'!

[perdiccas]

I have been imagining this since you told me how it was going to go but nothing prepared me for utterly beautiful and loving this was. My heart is so full and happy right now. You capture that blush of first romance so perfectly. I really liked all the pet names you have Mohinder calling Gabriel. Wonderfully sweet but not cloying.

[doctor_caduceus]

Let me just start by saying *tackles, snuggles, option on nibbles*

Ilu. Thank you. <3

[ladywilde80]

Just a second ago, I was basking the sweetness that was this absolutely gorgeous sex scene and then...Bam! Fucking Chandra and his creepy cup! Ewwwww. DO NOT WANT!XD

However, this story is made of win and awesome and a thousand other superlatives I can not even begin to find at the moment because I am so overcome with love for this story and for you!

BEST AU FIC EVER!I love your Gabriel so much! And Mohinder calling him 'sweetheart' and 'darling.' Yeah, I'm spent. Thank you!

[doctor_caduceus]

Thank you! God help me, I can't resist pet names...

[icalynn]

So, going to a special spot in hell for reading this at work!! Hee. So, hot... I always love first times. *g*

Can't wait for more!!

And Chandra is just creepy! *shudders*

[doctor_caduceus]

Yeah, Chandra is... Chandra's shapin' up to be the villain in this here picture.

Thank you!