*yawns* Getting used to this late night-*looks at clock*-early morning thing

Jul 16, 2008 12:59

Title: As If Sorry Could Make Up For This
Author: Tinkering
Summary: Bath scene! Finally! A lot more subliminal talk than smut though. Sorry!
Rating: Lol. Not even R. Only PG-13.
Warnings:  Obscene overuse of shower gel.

{Do I have to like...re-issue my challenge in the proper format for someone to answer it btw?}
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5 years gone, fic

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megmatthews20 July 17 2008, 06:26:49 UTC
Such fascinating backstory in terms of Mohinder's relationship with everyone else. I'm glad you had him calling Sylar on his actions here, and stopping him before things progressed too far. Mohinder's a tough dude...and even though things do eventually get to the other points you've shown in the story, it's nice to know he didn't cave right away! ^_^

cheers!

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he wouldn't just roll over and take it... original_tinks July 17 2008, 22:26:25 UTC
*snickers*...no, no, seriously. He wouldn't. But as one can see even Mohinder has lines that can be crossed...he's working with his.

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bonniesrg July 17 2008, 08:06:31 UTC
Haha awww how sweet, Momo's planning on lending a pole to hold up a tent.heh

It's telling that Sylar cares so much for Momo, that when he's so lost in thought about him he doesn't even notice Momo's body responding to him.

And Momo's choice of the sponge is a bit suspect, cause the sponge may be small and so you egt hands touching you through the side, but you'd feel more through a cloth and the gel permits you to have body contact whereas the soap would put a block between hand and flesh.

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*raises eyebrow* really? original_tinks July 17 2008, 22:29:19 UTC
*looks around shiftily*...opps.

I'd figure...the bar of soap would be all slippery and awkward shaped, it'd cause lots of accidental touching as opposed to yes, larger surface area towel but no need for bare skin. [Though yes, Momo did forget the sensation of rouch cloth is rather stimulating =P]

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Re: *raises eyebrow* really? bonniesrg July 17 2008, 23:51:15 UTC
He *forgot* did he.heh

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Re: *raises eyebrow* really? original_tinks July 18 2008, 10:46:52 UTC
!
Yes he forgot!
Are you trying to say Mohinder WANTED Sylar to touch his naked, wet body with a large wash cloth that would inevitably lead to him showing some 'reluctant' sign of arousal!?
=D
=D
=D

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eridanie July 17 2008, 08:20:00 UTC
Yes I agree with megmathews. Very interesting backstory, and I love the somehwat absurd love/hate triangle guadrangle?
Very awesome. I loved everything. And all the spicy cinnamon products made me LOL

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eridanie July 17 2008, 08:33:05 UTC
Oh and something you should know. perdiccas has an anonymous heroes kink meme that is great for making requests or getting ideas. Plus there's a whole bunch of kinks that could interlapp with yours that have already been answered on there. It seems to be where most people go if they're looking for requests to answer anyway so you should check it out :D

http://perdiccas.livejournal.com/5334.html

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You love the 'absurd' love/hate background...? original_tinks July 17 2008, 22:34:12 UTC
Absurd? *rears back*...It's no more absurd than your worse daytime soap opera!!! =P

It's simple. The mad serial killer you're in love with kidnaps you and uses you as a bargaining chip in a situation where you're everyone's love interest, including the brother he's impersonating who's dead and was also apparently in love with you while engaging in brother-loving incest!....Totally basic! =D

SPICY CINNAMON! WHOO!

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eridanie July 18 2008, 02:48:49 UTC
Hey I did say "somewhat" absurd :D

How did you know about my absurd daytime soap opera?
I love luke and Noah They're my pretty's.

You're right it's so simple thanks for clearing it up for nme.

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perdiccas July 17 2008, 12:22:20 UTC
Mmmm bath time kind of non-con. I like that Sylar is happily touching him up, but once he's called on the fact that it's actually edging towards rape he stops.

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original_tinks July 17 2008, 22:19:45 UTC
Sylar does not rape...Sylar gets willing participants once he takes off his shirt...lol!

The idea of being said to have raped someone turned him off so badly he ran =P

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alicambs March 28 2009, 17:13:32 UTC
You are going to finish this.... please, pretty Mohinder please?

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