My First Sylinder

[original_tinks]

Title: 10 Drabbles To Music

Author: Tinkering
Summary: I've never written this before so I want to enter this fandom...carefully. I love Sylinder/Mylar since I discovered it (I've been hunting it down rather stalkerishly actually) and can now no longer watch Heroes and Momo&Sylar scenes without smirking.
Warning: Erm, if you like any of these songs

Comments

[levitatethis]

Firstly, welcome to the comm! I love reading work by new writers.

Just a quick note -- I think there's a way of putting in a livejournal cut so that your post doesn't take up the main page. It keeps the main page simple and clean and then people (like me) can click on the link to get to the page with only your post.

I quite enjoyed these particularly the progression of their relationship touching on all the significant points -- from them first traveling together, being together, revealed truth, broken minds...wanting more that can't be yet it still exists just below the surface.

I absolutely love this line: Bruised and beaten but alive. And to Sylar that all but screamed what he could never say.

I was hoping you could tell me how...

[original_tinks]

It used to be

[perdiccas]

I'm always in awe of people who can a) write drabbles and b) do the write quickly to music thing.

These were really enjoyable. To echo levitatethis, I loved the progression. In particular I loved the line: Yet he couldn’t throw out those damned tea cups. Such simple imagery but with so much meaning.

I hope you keep writing! :D

[original_tinks]

Actually I usually suck at that. And a cheated a bit, doing some tinkering and adding in a sentence or two after the music was done...but, perfection needs work. Lol. [Stopped by Candy btw, shower was hawtness] =D

[bellonablack]

I really loved these...:-)

Esp. 6,8, and 10...

You are a very good writer and I hope to see more from you. :-)

-BB

Thank you so much!

[original_tinks]

I think number 8's drabble is actually growing on me as my favourite...even though I almost kinda hate that song on my iPod. Lol.

It's sometimes the missing the person in the small ways that gets you. Just like it's the small actions toward someone that reveal you.
[Holler number 6! =p *ruins her philosophical moment*]

[eridanie]

Welcome.
These are lovely. So sweet, and they made me a little sad too, they sort of have a star crossed lovers feel. They were just beautifull. I'm amazed you were able to write them during the span of a song.

My favorite parts:

"Really it was as if he was asking for what he couldn’t take. Zane was only too happy to oblige."

"For this one moment of…

I’m not alone anymore."

"Or he would…would slaughter everyone in New York just to be the only one Mohinder would have. And he would be clung to…"

Also I think the instructions for an lj-cut are on the help page under "How do I hide part of my entry behind a link? What is an lj-cut?" If you just copy and paste, then there's no risk that you'll mess up the code, also you can go back and edit it and add the cut in.

*flushes and looks away with guilty pleasure*

[original_tinks]

Almost during the span of a song...and of course I did a little prep to get the timeline right. I let my poddie do a random shuffle, clicked through the first ten songs and wrote them down, then thought of what I'd write for each. The actually writing though, took place during the song, yeah.

I think Momo and Sylar ARE star-crossed...little choices/differences in the timeline always get in their way because I say if it went towards 5 Yrs Gone...Sylar would pwn Momo's ass forever...but yeah, that's just me and my strange slavery kink. Mohinder...locked away somewhere in Sylar's bedroom...all day, every day...okay now, Mr. Prez needs a break. ... <---[the span of time for a quickie in the hidden back room]...okay Mr. Prez is good now [*strolls back in with a Nathan smile which equates to wide grin*] =D

[frozenfoxfire]

All right, that's it, I'm doing drabbles. They just look so fun...

I love your imagery. There's a lot of it that touches upon spiritual, and that's always a good thing to have with angst. :)

I WILL TAKE THAT CHALLENGE, SAH.
Tuning fork, coming up! :D

tuning fork!?

[original_tinks]

you promise!? =D *grins wide enough to break her face*...remember slightly-sadistic Momo is necessary for tuning fork sex...he doesn't have to be crazy sadistic just...Sylar likes it so...he grows to like it too kinda thing....okay let me not lead you. Go, write!