Fic: Duality

Jun 19, 2007 20:00

Title: Duality
Author: gyllespi
Pairing: Sylar/Gabriel/Mohinder (in a decidedly non-threesome way. sorry.)
Rating: PG-13 for adult themes (violence, sex)
Spoilers: Season 1.
Notes: Unbetaed, and as such, very rough. Here's my take on the Gemini Challenge, in which Sylar acquires a power that splits him into Sylar and Gabriel. I sort of strayed from the ( Read more... )

comm event: gemini challenge, character: gabriel, rating: pg-13, fic

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ebonyguitarchic June 20 2007, 02:08:21 UTC
Wow...that was awesome. Especially the last sentance. It was the perfect ending. Gave the real feeling of both Sylar and Gabriel. Good job

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kael_raye June 20 2007, 02:10:18 UTC
*tries to throw a balloon but it floats away* Umm...*watches it drift off out of sight* That was my good review...

Even though the ending confused me at first (<--had to read it over), I really liked this. ^_^

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gyllespi June 20 2007, 22:35:19 UTC
Thanks! ^^; Sorry the ending confused - my mind goes in strange directions, so what may look perfectly logical to me is probably incomprehensible to anyone else. >.>

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without_mission June 21 2007, 22:31:21 UTC
(gasp!) you made my drawing into an icon! (bear hug) I've got a huge grin now X)

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ichibichi June 20 2007, 02:28:11 UTC
Wow. I love how you end it and how you alternate between Gabriel and Sylar. This fic? Its brilliant!

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mystery_sock June 20 2007, 05:29:43 UTC
That's really great! I love the setup and the elaboration - especially Sylar and Gabriel battling it out in private, with Gabriel taking apart clocks while Sylar just hangs out and is cuh-ray-zee. Still, their connection to Mohinder is absolutely genuine, as are Mo's memories of first meeting "Zane."

This was straight-up perfect, as far as I'm concerned.

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gyllespi June 20 2007, 22:39:17 UTC
Oooh, thanks for the compliment! :D I really tried to think the situation out and make it seem realistic. I always worry that I'm not getting the characterization/setting/voices/etc. right. You reassure me.

lawl at Sylar's "cuh-ray-zee" and your username. XD

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aunt_zelda June 20 2007, 05:48:26 UTC
Lovely ...
*too tired @ two in the morning to give further compliments that are deserved on your part*
*friends you*

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