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Fic: Down Feathers

Sep 17, 2010 11:42

Title: Down Feathers
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Mohinder/Zane!Sylar
Rating: PG
Summary: For the schmoop_bingo challenge. Prompt: pillow fight (Word Count: 1,536)
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes.
Warnings: Road Trip, Slash
Arthur's Note: Originally I was not going to do this prompt, but gaiafaye insisted, so this is for her. (And no, I still have not gotten bingo ( Read more... )

genre: roadtrip, rating: pg, fic

Comments 6

eternal_moonie September 17 2010, 16:11:36 UTC

this is great!!!! I totally love it!

starrdust411 September 17 2010, 16:24:52 UTC

Thanks :)

snowlover17 September 17 2010, 19:51:38 UTC

I loved it! Thank you for writing this, it was amazing. I loved especially how Sylar's conscience spoke up.
Is there any chance there'll be a sequel? We'd love it;)

starrdust411 September 17 2010, 20:06:08 UTC

Thanks. I'm glad you liked it, although I don't think I'll do a sequel since I have a lot of other projects in the works right now.

gaiafaye September 19 2010, 07:29:51 UTC

"Insisted" is a very polite way of putting it. ;) And naturally since I nagged you about this, it took me two days to comment.

I wasn't expecting roadtrip fic, but it's a great way to pull the prompt off, not to mention the alcohol. lol It was very cute imagery (especially the feathers!). But then you angsted it up as you warned me. :P Though I like you went the less traveled road of Sylar being the uncomfortable one.

I think it's clear now that the real reason Sylar wanted rapid cellular regeneration was so he could never get drunk enough to let his conscience out of its cage again.

Thanks for writing this. <3

starrdust411 September 19 2010, 16:26:16 UTC

LOL. Well it's nothing compared to how I've been pestering you about that mpreg fic How is that going btw? Because I posted my pillow fight fic. Just say XP

I wasn't expecting roadtrip fic, but it's a great way to pull the prompt off, not to mention the alcohol.

Drunken!roadtrip was the only possible way I could imagine Mohinder having a pillow fight with anyone.

But then you angsted it up as you warned me. :P Though I like you went the less traveled road of Sylar being the uncomfortable one.

I honestly don't know how this went from "drunk pillow fighting" to angstville. It was just a strangely natural progression. And of course Sylar was uncomfortable. That was about to be his first kiss and he didn't want to ruin things by being drunk and crying (it'd make the segue into timid baby-deer-standing-for-the-first-time love making even more awkward)

I think it's clear now that the real reason Sylar wanted rapid cellular regeneration was so he could never get drunk enough to let his conscience out of its cage again.LOL! That just ( ... )