Fic: Knocking on the Wrong Door

Sep 12, 2010 12:29

Title: Knocking on the Wrong Door
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar
Rating: PG-13
Summary: For the schmoop_bingo challenge. Prompt: Friend in need (Word Count: 1,604)
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes.
Warnings: AU from Vol 5, Slash

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mohinder plus powers, rating: pg-13, genre: au

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maxinegray September 12 2010, 21:19:43 UTC
This is just fantastic.

And I wanted to give you a huge thank you for constantly contributing to the Mylar fandom! I don't comment ever anymore but I wanted to tell you that I love and appreciate each one!

This one especially I loved. It reminds me of the good old days of Mylar and makes me wish this really had happened! Great work and thanks again!

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starrdust411 September 12 2010, 22:11:53 UTC
What can I say? Even though the show is canceled, I'm still somewhat addicted to writing for this pairing.

I wasn't sure about this story since the whole purpose of this prompt contest was the be fluffy and this came out a strange blend of dark and fluffy, but I'm glad to see that it worked.

Thanks for reading and commenting :)

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eternal_moonie September 12 2010, 21:22:06 UTC
I really love this story. Great job!

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starrdust411 September 12 2010, 22:12:12 UTC
Thank you :)

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jemisard September 13 2010, 01:07:56 UTC
I love this story. Sylar's solution of "something's wrong, find Mohinder" is adorable and completely fitting to him. It's what he would do.

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starrdust411 September 13 2010, 01:25:50 UTC
Sylar will use anything as an excuse to seek out Mohinder. Toothbrush is missing: go find Mohinder :P

Thanks for reading and commenting :)

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jemisard September 13 2010, 01:28:25 UTC
That... probably shouldn't have spawned a plot bunny, right? Because I'm picturing Mohinder's face when Sylar breaks in and says "I can't find my toothbrush" and Mohinder is like "... what?"

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starrdust411 September 13 2010, 02:43:33 UTC
LOL I did not intend to inspire, but if you feel like making an epic story from that then go for it ;)

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gaiafaye September 13 2010, 02:40:52 UTC
lol In the context of Mylar, it is relatively fluffy that Sylar feels it would be more rewarding to get kissy-faced with Mohinder awake instead of unconscious. Plus he feels *complete* now! Aw. :)

Poor Riverside nurse. He could've been shouting the meaning of life and Sylar wouldn't have heard him.

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starrdust411 September 13 2010, 02:45:45 UTC
I'm glad this piece is fluffy in some context. Although it's ironic then when I write something that's even remotely dark it comes out far shorter than my humor or purely fluff pieces :P

I doubt that nurse was shouting anything except "please stop ruining everything just so you can get laid"

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blaidd_drwg September 14 2010, 11:42:57 UTC
Yay, Sylar to the rescue! I liked how you lead up to why he'd want to get Mohinder out of the asylum and the tenderness he showed him. Lovely read.

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starrdust411 September 14 2010, 19:48:50 UTC
Any reason is a good reason to get Mohinder out of that asylum :P

Thanks for reading :)

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