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Fic: Kidnapped

Aug 11, 2010 18:10

Title: Kidnapped
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Sylar/Mohinder, minor Peter/Claude
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Sylar takes matters into his own hands. (Continuation to the Fathers series)
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes.
Warnings: Humor, Implied Mpreg, AU, Slash, Implied Violence

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rating: pg-13, genre: fluff, genre: au, silliness, mohinder plus powers, character: noah bennet, character: peter, fic

Comments 11

gaiafaye August 12 2010, 01:12:20 UTC

"See if I ever do you any favors."

"You've never done anything for me!"

lol! Phhbt, doesn't Peter realize the great honor he has of simply being in Sylar's presence?

And I forgot about the Manu-can't-be-President bit! Still hilarious.

"And he kiss Thirsty good morning here." He tapped the tiger's button nose and suddenly Sylar hated that tiger.

That tiger's gonna end up in the garbage disposal. And why is his name Thirsty?

Mohinder's epic righteous anger is awesomely epic, btw.

"Please, Papa?" Manu begged sweetly, his dark brown eyes impossibly wide as he gazed up at Sylar hopefully.

Oh, God! Don't look into the eyes! Not the eyes!

By eight forty-five, Mohinder's cricket bat had snapped clean in half and the geneticist had gotten his fill of beating Sylar senseless. The serial killer had lost count of how many times he had "died" and been brought back that morningI see a healthy, fulfilling relationship ahead ( ... )

starrdust411 August 12 2010, 02:34:11 UTC

Phhbt, doesn't Peter realize the great honor he has of simply being in Sylar's presence?

LOL. Sylar's "friendship" is the gift that keeps on giving.

I forgot about the Manu-can't-be-President bit! Still hilarious.

As far as Sylar's concerned, the sky's the limit for that kid. If he wants to be a unicorn farmer on Mars, Sylar will work something out to make sure it happens :P

And why is his name Thirsty?

That tiger's not going anywhere, not unless Sylar wants to deal with the epic crying fit of a small child who has lost their favorite toy. The tiger's name is a reference to Life of Pi, which I was re-reading when I wrote some of this. :P If you ever intend on reading that book, then that's all I can say without giving any kind of spoiler away.

Mohinder's epic righteous anger is awesomely epic, btw.

I'm telling you, when I upload this on FF.Net, I'm probably going to get a bunch of Sylar fangirls who will say that Mohinder is being an unreasonable bitch. But I don't care. In my book AngryMommy!Mohinder is always awesome.

And in ( ... )

anachro_nomad August 12 2010, 01:15:28 UTC

So glad to see this series updated! It's one of my favorites of all time in this fandom.
This chapter was great. I'm pleased to see both Mohinder and Sylar taking a step in the right direction.
I also loved the lol-factor. Particular hilights for me were: Manu's explanation of why HIS cows are blue, and of course Mohinder's gangsta-ass cricket bat. I love that little tidbit of culture you inserted. (I also got a lovely image of Sendhil in one of those old school all-white cricket uniforms...) :D

starrdust411 August 12 2010, 02:22:37 UTC

I'm glad you liked it, although I'm still a bit ashamed of how long it took me to finish. I must have re-written this chapter 3 different times in three different ways before settling on this story. :P

alicambs August 12 2010, 09:36:02 UTC

Great instalment, absolutely loved the Manu / Sylar relationship although my favourite bit was when Mohinder beat the shit out of Sylar. :-) Go Mo, go.

starrdust411 August 12 2010, 15:57:58 UTC

Sylar can always do with a good beating lol.

Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading :D

game_byrd August 15 2010, 02:20:57 UTC

I haven't read the other chapters but wow... I'm still trying to decide if you're handling the domestic abuse and extreme psychological issues as light-hearted (in which case it turns my stomach) or as dark humor (in which case... as long as you have the characters react in a realistic manner to it, I'm down with it). Sylar flinching away from Mohinder in the stairwell was particularly wrenching. I've been hurt a few times by people I thought I loved and yeah, you do flinch when they reach for you again after that. It's just instinctive. "Unconscious" you called it, which is as good a term.

I'm not sure I'm down with the rain of mpreg, but if it's out there, then I can see Sylar giving it to Peter like a freaking virus. :)

starrdust411 August 20 2010, 23:42:06 UTC

First of all, I am very sorry that this story stirred up bad memories for you. I did not mean to offend or hurt anyone with my fanfic, just entertain. That being said, I am just a fanfic writer. I'm not a real author, I don't make money off of this or anything like that. I am not trying to teach morality or sway anyone's way of thinking, just entertain people for a little while.

Still, I am not trying to make light of the issue of domestic abuse. It didn't even cross my mind in relation to this story because Mohinder and Sylar are not in a relationship, romantic or otherwise. Of course you could pose the argument that physical violence for the sake of humor is no laughing matter and once again I do apologize for upsetting you with my story.

game_byrd August 21 2010, 01:53:46 UTC

Eh, it's okay. I assume you saw my other comments. I read the rest and was impressed. For one, I've never seen mpreg done seriously. I thought you handled it well. I'm kind of sorry you weren't trying to make a deep statement about violence in relationships, or the unpleasant realities of loving someone as unbalanced as Sylar (or worse, being loved by him in a one-sided fashion), but as you say, fanfic is for entertainment and most of that is achieved without any deeper purpose.

I liked your stuff and I even went so far as to mention it to a couple other people and recommend it. They didn't pursue it, I'm sorry to say.

riddlevoldemort August 20 2010, 22:57:31 UTC

Please don’t get me wrong, I really LOVE this story and your style of writing! This is one of the best Mylar fics I know and I totally adore you (you're one of my favorite authors) but to be honest this chapter was terrifying. Domestic violence is far from funny and if I were in Sylars shoes, I would never forgive Mohinder. He should definitely apologise for his act.

“Do you think if I took something as precious away from you a simple 'I'm sorry' would be enough to fix everything?”

Oô… That’s exactly what he did to Sylar when he took Manu away from him.

starrdust411 August 20 2010, 23:37:21 UTC

As you can probably tell from the comment above yours you are actually the second person to address the issue of "domestic violence" in this story and I want to make several things clear:

First and most importantly, I do not support domestic abuse. That being said, I'm sure that any fanfic writer who has ever written noncon or dubcon will tell you that they do not support rape and hopefully people who write chan or shota will tell you they do not support having sex with children. This is a fanfic. I am not a published author, I am not making money for this, and of course I am not here to teach morality. I'm not saying you have no right to feel offended -- your feelings are your own and you have every right to them and I apologize if you feel that I was making light of a serious issue -- but I want to make it very clear that I am not here to educate, just entertain ( ... )