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Fic: Waking Dream

May 27, 2010 23:22

Title: Waking Dream
Author: lastcutebender
Character/Pairing: Sylar/Gabriel G., Mohinder.
Rating: R (just to be safe.)
Word Count: 1849
Disclaimer: Don't own Heroes.
Warning: If you don't like AU's or Slight AU's, do not continue.
Author's Note: I know I've been MIA for a while, without internet and what not, but I'm back! Anyway, I've actually wanted to post this ( Read more... )

character: elle, genre: au, rating: r, character: adam, fic

Comments 9

starrdust411 May 28 2010, 15:32:29 UTC

When I first saw this post I was like "Hey... somebody wrote a story with the same title as JayJay's" :P

Rereading this chapter was really interesting. This has the same creepy vibe to it, but I also noticed other things that I didn't catch the first time around.

Glad to see you posting again. I hope you continue.

lastcutebender May 28 2010, 15:47:46 UTC

LoL! That would have been weird, It's like "Who took my title!?!?!?!?".

OoOo, what new things caught your eye?

I hope I continue too, LoL! I still need to finish Estrogen and Trial and Error. I'm kinda mad at myself for posting this but I really wanted to, so that's why I did. ^_^

alicambs May 28 2010, 22:36:10 UTC

I'm intrigued.

lastcutebender May 29 2010, 06:23:06 UTC

Is it wrong that with that statement I feel pressure? LoL! Thanks so much for reviewing and I am happy to know that you are intrigued.

alicambs May 29 2010, 19:49:27 UTC

Pressure, what pressure...?

*wanders off whistling* :-)

levitatethis May 28 2010, 23:34:52 UTC

You've certainly captured my interest with this chapter. I like how we, as the reader, have a bit more insight into Gabriel than he does and yet there's still this abstract quality that keeps us at bay as well. Nice set up. It's very intriguing.

lastcutebender May 29 2010, 06:28:46 UTC

I have to admit that I had a lot of fun writing this. I fooled around with different fonts and italics, its the first thing I've written that I've actually stylized. So knowing that it gives the sense of not seeing the whole picture really makes me happy cause that's what I was aiming for. I'm glad it's captured your attention, now let's hope I can keep it! LoL!

Thank you so much for reviewing! ^_^

gaiafaye May 28 2010, 23:46:34 UTC

I like this opener. Something fishy is going on and I definitely want to know what.

lastcutebender May 29 2010, 06:31:46 UTC

LoL, yes something fishy is afoot! I'm glad you enjoyed this first chapter and hope you'll like the next just as much.

Thanks so much for reviewing! ^_^