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Fic: Primatech 815 - Ch. 13

Nov 17, 2009 11:14

Title: Primatech 815
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes (Crossover with Lost)
Characters: Ando, Bennet, Claire, Claude, Hiro, Isaac, Peter, Matt, Micah, Mohinder, Niki, Simone, Sylar (more to come)
Rating: R
Summary: A plane crash unites a group of strangers.
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes or Lost.
Warnings: AU, Violence, Action/Adventure, Drug use, Het, ( Read more... )

character: claude, character: isaac, character: claire, genre: au, rating: r, genre: crossover, character: noah bennet, character: matt, character: peter, fic

Comments 4

hopefulwriter27 November 18 2009, 02:46:42 UTC

I love that Claire thought Sylar and Mohinder were a couple! Great chapter. :)

starrdust411 November 18 2009, 02:53:14 UTC

LOL. Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading.

levitatethis November 18 2009, 13:26:08 UTC

I like how we're seeing more cracks in various relationships, particularly ones that seemed to be okay but now have a hint of strain. It goes to the uncertainty of the situation they're all in and the reality of conflicting ideas and opinions on what to do.

Love Claire thinking Mohinder and Sylar are a couple and that Mohinder is too good for him :-)

I'm impressed with your handling of the flashbacks to flesh out the characters. You're giving them layers (good and bad) that make them far more interesting and have raised my curiosity for how they'll act/react as the story unfolds.

starrdust411 November 18 2009, 14:59:45 UTC

Yeah, one of the things I loved most about Lost is how just about everybody changes from the way they were in the pilot episode. We get to see their flaws and see them either improve and grow or fail to adapt and die. It's definitely something I'm trying to incorperate into this fic.

LOL Mohinder is too good for any incarnation of Sylar. And Mohinder's "problem" is that he knows it. :P

Isaac's flash backs were the hardest so far since so little is known about him. And the next couple of characters I'm doing are just as difficult since I'm going to change their entire history to fit this world yet still try to maintain who they are. It's going to be a pain. But I'm glad that you're enjoying the way I'm portraying our characters in this world. It's good to know that I'm doing a decent job keeping them true to themselves.

Thank you for reading and commenting. I apperciate it. :D