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Fic: Primatech 815 - Ch. 11

Nov 03, 2009 10:29

Title: Primatech 815
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes (Crossover with Lost)
Characters: Ando, Bennet, Claire, Claude, Hiro, Isaac, Peter, Matt, Micah, Mohinder, Niki, Simone, Sylar (more to come)
Rating: R
Summary: A plane crash unites a group of strangers.
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes or Lost.
Warnings: AU, Violence, Action/Adventure, Drug use, Het, ( Read more... )

character: claude, character: isaac, genre: au, genre: angst, rating: r, genre: crossover, character: ando, character: noah bennet, character: hiro, character: peter, character: matt, fic

Comments 7

Love harial November 5 2009, 00:34:19 UTC

This is awesome! Though, if you want to add more mylar action, I would not be opposed... ;P

Re: Love starrdust411 November 5 2009, 01:59:19 UTC

LOL well I'm trying to keep this an ensamble fic, so sadly there will times when there is little to no mylar. But don't worry, their relationship will develope as the story goes on :)

Thank you for reading and responding.

Re: Love harial November 21 2009, 07:45:12 UTC

Hello ( ... )

lastcutebender November 5 2009, 02:57:19 UTC

Oh bow down to all knowing Bennet!

"... I feel your most recent paintings, while vibrant, are not nearly as deep and involved as your original pieces. You'd probably be better off if you quit the drugs."

I just imagine Isaac being so surprised at the end of that statement LoL!!!!

I love the flashbacks, I can't wait to find out more about those two.
And I love that Matt was like "I don't wanna be in the background anymore ARGH!!!"

I love how everyone in this chapter is involved but they aren't the main focus. You did a good job at keeping them present but in the background somewhat.

Great update!!!

starrdust411 November 5 2009, 03:29:51 UTC

Bennet knows all and sees all!

I'm glad you liked the flashbacks! They were my favorite part of this chapter. Hiro & Ando just shooting the breeze is really fun to write :D

Once again, Matt is pointing out my failings as a writer. I really need to get him and the other characters more invovled with the plot! XO

greyelveneyes November 6 2009, 07:15:15 UTC

I love the feel of this as an ensemble piece--it's such a trip to see all these characters interacting in such an outlandish setting and without their powers (at least so far). I love the slow build up you have with all of them, and how you've given them each backstories that are both unique to the story and still keeping with some of the canon of the show.

LOVE IT.

starrdust411 November 6 2009, 12:46:52 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad somebody else is liking the ensamble element of this story. I've had a lot of people asking me to focus more on Mohinder & Sylar when I'm really struggling to include everyone lol. Well, there won't be any abilities in this story. I feel like if they were to develop powers it would make things more complicated and easier at the same time (like if Hiro had his time manipulation he could either teleport everyone off the island or just go back in time and stop them from board the plane)

Thank you for reading and commenting. I really apperciate getting feed back :D