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Fic: Primatech 815 - Ch. 9

Oct 20, 2009 10:35

Title: Primatech 815
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes (Crossover with Lost)
Characters: Ando, Bennet, Claire, Claude, Hiro, Isaac, Peter, Matt, Micah, Mohinder, Niki, Simone, Sylar (more to come)
Rating: R
Summary: A plane crash unites a group of strangers.
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes or Lost.
Warnings: AU, Violence, Action/Adventure, Drug use, Het, ( Read more... )

character: claude, character: claire, character: niki, genre: au, genre: angst, rating: r, character: nathan, genre: crossover, character: ando, character: noah bennet, character: peter, character: matt, fic, character: angela

Comments 4

lastcutebender October 21 2009, 15:15:44 UTC

I love the Nathan/Peter flashback. He's a great role model, drinking and driving, how responsible! LoL.

Omg, I LOVE that Sylar is wandering around trying to get things for other people just so that he can get tea, so hilarious!!!

It's absolutely adorable that Claire was a tomboy, it really does fit her.

Another great chapter! ^_^

starrdust411 October 23 2009, 02:10:24 UTC

And that's why he's a Senator... Congressman... What the hell was Nathan's job at the begining of season 1? O_o

levitatethis October 22 2009, 19:45:56 UTC

Trying to make coherent sentences while I'm sick is a pain in the ass :-)

I like how this chapter fleshes out Peter a bit by drawing on his relationship with Nathan and connecting it to his social position on the island -- how others perceive him versus how he sees himself. I'm looking forward to how this further plays out.

How much do I love Claude referring to Sylar as Eyebrows? LOL And I like his reading of Mohinder and Sylar being a couple...what I really like though is the way this leads into Sylar having to wheel and deal a bit to get what he wants...for Mohinder.

starrdust411 October 23 2009, 02:16:52 UTC

Awww, I hope you're feeling back to normal soon. I've personally never had the flu before, but I know getting over a regular cold is a total pain in the butt.

Like I've said before, I personally would not vote Peter as my leader and I've always viewed his character as the type of person that will volunteer for something, but wouldn't nessicarily take charge. I definitely want this Peter to be like season 1 Peter in that he is helpful, yet vulnerable.

LOL, I can't see Claude being afraid of Sylar. Mock him, yes. Afraid, no :P (I don't know if you caught it, but Matt also referred to them as a couple. We will start to see a lot more people make that "error" as the story goes on) Writing Sylar having non-violent interractions with the rest of the cast is both fun and difficult. The Sylar persona just ooze hostility :P

Thank you for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it :D