Fic: Primatech 815 - Ch. 7

[starrdust411]

Title: Primatech 815
Author: starrdust411
Fandom: Heroes (Crossover with Lost)
Characters: Ando, Bennet, Claire, Claude, Hiro, Isaac, Peter, Matt, Micah, Mohinder, Niki, Simone, Sylar (more to come)
Rating: R
Summary: A plane crash unites a group of strangers.
Disclaimer: I do not own Heroes or Lost.
Warnings: AU, Violence, Action/Adventure, Drug use, Het,

Comments

[levitatethis]

How exciting to see another chapter and one with so much going on! Though I like Peter I can already see the issues with him as the de facto leader trying to make decisions but ultimately not wanting to be the the one. It'll be interesting to see how that plays amidst the larger group, as they work together but also as individuals with their own expectations and wants.

With this chapter I like how you've split up parts of the larger group and aligned certain people -- it makes for the future interactions to be a curiosity.

[starrdust411]

Yeah, I didn't realize until I was writing this chapter (and the next one) just how much was happening in Walkabout. Unfortunately since there is so much important story materal, I felt like I didn't do a very good job of making this "Bennet's chapter" although the next one is more focused on him

[levitatethis]

Mohinder and Bennet are sort of part of the A-team, but will be in and out of command in that sort of "I understand you see me as an athority figure, but that's not really what I'm here to do" sort of way.

This is how I've always seen Sayid (so your icon is particularly awesome). To me he may not be the official leader, but he's the one I would defer to in terms of respecting and hearing his opinion on what's going on. Shoot, I can't remember which season it was when everyone had to make a choice to either go with Jack or Locke and my immediate reaction was, "where's Sayid going?" because he's the only one I trusted.

The way you're setting up Mohinder here is quite similar and I really like that. Especially with the added conflict of Sylar in the mix since he's one of the troublemakers (and I definitely saw Sylar and Claude as Sawyer here), it makes for a very interesting tension.

[starrdust411]

Damn, I wish I had another Sayid icon to throw down. I guess it's Mohinder time. :P

*SPOILERS FOR LOST*

It was the first episode of season 4 after the frieghter was discovered to not be Penny's. I believe Sayid went with Jack because he's always been actively trying to get off the island, which is another thing he and Mohinder have in common. I can't see Mohinder in a situation like this and just sitting back, making the best of things. Sylar will always be complicated things for Mohinder, I do want to have him try to be "nice", but in his own special Sylar way.

[lastcutebender]

Can I just say that the icons shown here are fucking awesome? I can't look away...

Anyway, I really enjoyed this chapter! I have to say that my favorite part is when Niki is asking Hiro to babysit, just because its Hiro LoL!

Peter is definitely going to start to have to man up and make decisions, no Petertears here!!!!

Oh and Claude and his stash, epic. I love it when Peter has to tilt his head back to look Claude in the eye, totally made me LoL!!

The end of these chapters sneak up on me, I'll scroll down to read more and then I see the Post a new comment link and I gets sad :(

Keep up the awesomeness!!!

[starrdust411]

You can look at the icons all you want, just be sure to skip over that spoiler I wrote :P

Hiro would be an awesome babysitter (ignoring that whole season 3 thing about him not liking kids. Why? Because he's jealous that they get to act exactly how he acts without being judged? :P Seriously guys, wtf?)

Can't he have a few Peter tears? Just a few? Because I do plan on making him cry in the near future... And then he will start acting like a man... sort of.

I have to break them up somewhere! I can't just throw a whole episode together! Well... I can, but... hush!