[Fanfic] 'Love Is An Unverified Rumor ' Prussia/Germany

[mykonos2]

Title: Love Is An Unverified Rumor  (4/4)

Character(s): Prussia, Germany, France, Bismarck, Wilhelm I

Pairing:  Prussia/Germany

Rating: NC-17

Warnings: teen!Germany (around 16 or 17), human names, historical figures, sex in later chapters

Summary: This is not another Unification story, it's a new Unification story. Bismarck brings Germany to live

Comments

[idraax]

Awww, this was sweet. We love you too.

[mykonos2]

&hearts :3

[cyrelia_j]

Wow, I love the vivid picture that you paint with all of the history. I felt so caught up in the setting and every character came to life beautifully. our language and descriptions were so elegant I just can't say enough good things about this story :) Thank you so much for deciding to share this!

[mykonos2]

Thank you so much for reading and taking time to comment, it's the biggest motivation I can get &hearts I'm really glad you enjoyed reading :)

[polandodesu]

Woooooooooow. I love you way of writing *spuealing fangirl much?*

One thing, though: "Even if he knocks, Gilbert will probably ignore him." That sentence in present appeared while the rest of the text that place was past.

You're ruining my self-confidence regarding my own English-abilities because I have to look up so many words while reading the stuff you write.
But I love it, I love leaning new words and reading things on a bit higher level than I'm used to (:

[mykonos2]

Thanks, hun :D

Oh, I'll ask my beta right away - she didn't make a correction there. It sounded good to me actually since I wanted to convey a 'general truth', I didn't use it for narration purposes. But I'll check that. :3

I learned few of those words only recently, but I think other people will learn them easier when they see it 'in action', that is in fics and such. It's easier to remember that way, so maybe someone even learned a word or two from this story xD

[polandodesu]

Ah, okay!

I love fancy words <3 - And I think you're right, they're easier to remember when you see them "in action"!

[mykonos2]

&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts&hearts

Darling, thank you so much for making me write this story... *big internet hug*

Yeah, about that, haha - you remember when I told you, even before I started writing the story, that you shouldn't expect a perfect, exaggerated and fairytale-like first time, because the things don't function like that. I mean, I still have to meet a person who screamed in pleasure during their first time lol So I kept it more or less realistic (that's why I put 'first time sex' in the warning), but Gilbo wouldn't be Gilbo without being awesome and getting Lud to enjoy too in the end xD

ffffff *goes to correct that* I didn't even notice DD: What a stupid typo *sob*

*hugs again and squeezes the life out of you*

[esonador]

This one was really excellent :) I enjoyed it much more than that previous chapter :)

[mykonos2]

Glad you did! :D