Original Prologue, tell me what you think?

Jun 27, 2009 15:52

They say that we were human once, in a time so long ago even our oldest tombs reference it only as the past.  I sometimes wonder what it would have been like, to be born into the world that existed before the infernal and the abyssal lay siege to this one.  I wonder if my story would be different, happier ( Read more... )

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sillyfax June 27 2009, 21:08:13 UTC
*shivers* I'd so read this. And I hope I will.

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myjadedhavok June 27 2009, 21:15:33 UTC
Wow, I just realized how many grammatical and spelling errors were in that post! Need to fix, lol.

And thank you! *blushes* Its very different from anything I've ever tried. But, in a good way, I think.

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thanku4thvenom June 27 2009, 22:12:07 UTC
Huzzah, new magic fic!

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myjadedhavok June 27 2009, 23:20:02 UTC
:D

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myjadedhavok July 6 2009, 03:19:28 UTC
Not back yet! But hopefully soon! I cannot stand being away from my beloved internet for this long.

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textuck June 27 2009, 23:26:25 UTC
It has the rhythym and feel of a legend. The stage has certainly been set for an epic story. Is this going to be high fantasy or low fantasy?

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lizwinlove June 28 2009, 01:00:27 UTC
this is amazing and I can't wait for more. Honestly, I would buy this. You should try to publish it when its finished.

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myjadedhavok July 6 2009, 03:18:12 UTC
You are incredibly sweet!

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