Come Here Boy

[myenduringheart]

Title: Come here boy
Length: 6539 words
Pairing: Tao/Sehun, past Tao/Chanyeol
Rating: NC-17
Summary: There's always a cost in getting what you want. Sehun learns that he's willing to pay the price when Zitao is the reward.
Warnings: stealing, arson, facefucking, rimming, breathplay, minor character death
Author's Note: Written for 12 Horrors.

Comments

[soft_wallnuts]

Oh wow, the dark mood in this fic is amazing. ♥ The story won me over right at the beginning and the more I read, the more I loved it. ^^

Demon!Zitao is such an interesting character and there's so much I'd like to know about him like how his powers work (if he needs someone's love or lust to fuel them) and if Chanyeol was even close to being the first one to find him. And who had that cage built anyway? ^^Ahhh, demon!Zitao needs more story for sure~

Although I love the chemistry between Taohun, dang... Sehun sure came a long way from a good boy to a murderer. But who knows, maybe demon sex is worth becoming a sinner for? ;D Chanyeol's story was a great comparison to Sehun's character progress though, really loved that part.

Thank you for sharing this! ♥ Seriously what a cool story. ^^

[myenduringheart]

Ahh thank you for the lovely comment! Chanyeol definitely wasn't the first to find Zitao but perhaps Sehun will be the last... maybe... ^^ I'm really happy to hear that you enjoyed it - thanks again :)

[holystardown]

I absolutely love this! Sehun's gradual descent into rebellion and evil is perfect with the sharp drop at the end. There are so many possibilities as to where he and Tao will go from there and what the real dynamics of their relationship are. Does Tao generally want just sehun or is he just using his energy until sehun burns out or something happens to him? Will sehun get to be too much for Tao to handle and turn on Tao himself? (If you wrote a continuation I would be 1000% on board but being left to wonder is great too)

Your style is absolutely beautiful and your characterization makes sehun so believable. Of course Tao as a demon isn't exactly ~realistic~, but in a realm where those kinds of things exist as tangible beings, Tao is believable too. He doesn't immediately goad sehun into doing the worst- doesn't even do that at all really. He just baits sehun with good fortune and a bit of mischief, and sehun fills in the rest himself. It's perfect <3

[myenduringheart]

Thank you! I'm so happy that you liked it. I hadn't even thought about a continuation tbh because I did that thing where I signed up for too many fic fests and burned myself out o_O but oohhh maybe!

Thanks again for your lovely comment <3

[julyfix]

this is everything i love in a fic. vague but specific, dark but enchanting. you reeled me in until the very end. zitao's character is stunning.
thank you for sharing this work~

[myenduringheart]

Aww thanks for reading and commenting! I'm really happy that you liked it.

[roundaboutit]

This is so beautiful, I love it. I was enraptured from the very beginning and completely engrossed until the very end. I don't read very much Taohun, but this was absolutely perfect and incredibly enjoyable.

[myenduringheart]

Thank you for giving it a chance! <3

[atomicink]

omg ok i originally wandered over here bc of your lose lose xiutao fic and was interested in what other stuff you'd written, and WOW you've got me HOOKED

this is just so perfectly creepy and dark and frantic and GOOD!!! your characterizations and the way you captured the mood is amazing!

thanks for writing such a wonderful fic!

[myenduringheart]

Thank you so much for your lovely comment :) I'm really happy that you enjoyed it!