The White Raven (fanfiction)

[myagedparchment]

It was a morning like any other.  The sun, warm and gentle, diffused through the soft white clouds that drifted down from the mountain tops, falling like bright snowflakes of light, waking the little village as a mild mother gently wakes her young child.

Down from the mountains came a cool, tumbling breeze that ran giddily along the wide dirt

Comments

[jintymac]

That was a fantastic opening to your au fic!

You've set everything up beautifully and I can't wait to see what happens next :D

[myagedparchment]

Thank you! I'm so excited to get it rolling.

[kdsusa3]

Love the start of this. It will be interesting to see what happens when the two meet.

[myagedparchment]

Oh you have no idea *evil chuckle*

[kdsusa3]

Oh man, now I am really intrigued. I have a feeling, by the tone of you chuckle, that it will be delicious. I'm prostrating myself at your feet. Please update soon.

[grdnofevrythng]

I second that.

[mercurychkita]

This is an amazing start. Your descriptions are compelling and fantastically evocative. You've set the scene beautifully, and I can already tell this is going to be quite the journey for these characters. I'm interested to know what name you've given Miranda, and how you're going to set up their meeting (not to mention what follows).

[myagedparchment]

Thank you very muchly :) I can't wait to push the ball down the hill : D

[myagedparchment]

It's okay! You're supposed to! I'm actually... perhaps... planning on something... down the line....

*waggles eyebrows*

Ohhhh, I dun wanna ruin it lol.

(Besides, it may never happen aaah)

[xavacid]

oh, I can't wait for more.

[myagedparchment]

Good :)