Exhibitionism, NCIS, DiNozzo/McGee, R

[my_young_friend]

Title: Exhibitionism
Rating: Soft R
Pairing/Character: DiNozzo/McGee, mention of Ziva/Abby
Summary: All this trouble from one little hickey.
Warnings/Spoilers: None
A/N: Written for the Five Things Meme. one_windiga asked for Biting/Marking and the boys were happy to oblige.

Comments

[wingstar102]

I snickered for the entire fic. Loved this! Will beg and grovel for more!

Love and cherries,
Wingstar

[my_young_friend]

You asked and I (eventually) managed to get it done! Glad you liked it.

[ex_hellesof]

This was deliciously hot. I loved your descriptive phrasing. Like this line...

"No, you said he." Abby broke into a smile. If he had to categorise it, it would be the 'I've just tricked you into revealing information which I will now use for my benefit' grin.

That was brilliant and painted a clear picture in my head. I could see that scene as if it was on the television.

I also loved how Tony called Tim on showing out. Then Tim just admitted it without any guilt or self-conscious backlash.

Overall, I liked the low, steady thrum of heat and sensuality that flowed through out the fic. Then the actual idea of marking was carried across clearly and well... yummy.

[my_young_friend]

Wow, such a wonderful comment! Thank you so much, I'm glad the imagery came through clearly. I can't help but see these two as equals, so it only makes sense to treat their place in the relationship as such. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[shannonknits]

Judging by this and your other fics, you, my friend, are very good at hitting on my kinks. Your fics make me all happy in my belly.

[my_young_friend]

Glad I got the belly seal of approval! Thank you very much.

[theeverdream]

I love the ending!

[my_young_friend]

Thanks! It's a conversation I'd love to be a fly on the wall for!

[dinozzoitis]

lol cute!

[my_young_friend]

Thanks!