YKC 2

[my_pen_name]

Title: Your Kisses Cut

Pairing: Gerbert

Rating: PG (a couple naughty words, nothing graphic)

Summary: as those words leave your tongue everything is clear and readable A letter from Bert to Gerard

Author: yet2comeundone/ my_pen_name

Disclaimer: Fictional, meaning it came from my mind not the world

Letter 1

Comments

[gc_blinkie_182]

Awww...
Very good...
WRITE MORE OR ELSE!

[sir_jesus]

The first part of that (before your narrator gets to the cutting) reminds me very much of something someone said to me once; it's kind of eerie, but fascinating to read it. As for the cutting thing, it doesn't seem out of place, and the detail - that the addressed character could speak so logically and yet be so obviously screwed up - more than justifies the narrator's frustration with the addressed.

Chris

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