Aura

May 10, 2008 20:41

Whipped this up last week. A short story for the hell of it. Took me like 3 hours, so enjoy! :)
I was experimenting with voice in characters and decided to step away from the typical "female author = female first person voice" and use a guy instead.
And yes, I used Dan on the cover art; there were no better pictures! =P

I wasn't really supposed to fall in love in the first place... )

writing: short stories, aura

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katebert May 13 2008, 23:01:14 UTC
:| *WAHHHHHHH* WHY ARE YOU MAKING ME CRY? it was really good...the last line was amazing! really powerful way to end the story.

"Before she spoke a word I had loved her." and "I noticed you" made me swoon. ♥ loved it

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harrypotterchic May 14 2008, 00:23:02 UTC
thank you ^-^

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