Oh this was just wonderful. I love quiet stories so much. Especially when they are just the right balance of thoughful and funny and the little details.
And maybe it's a little embarrassing to admit, but my favorite little detail of this particular story is definitely:
Then again, he might have felt a little sorry for Ray because Adam Lazarra had been the one to open the bus door, buck naked and eating banana sandwich.
Lead singers well and truly are a breed of their own.
I actually snorted with laughter.
And I really, really appreciate how much Bob and Ray are really Bob and Ray in this. I think they can both be very hard to write sometimes, what with not being as public and vocal.
I'm glad that the quietness seem to have come across well for most people who read this. I'm still trying to find a comfortable pace for writing stories that develop over time like this, and this is just one experiment.
Thanks for reading and commenting.
And yeah, I'm most intrigued by Bob and Ray because they don't put themselves out there as much as the others, but they create an interesting dynamic, definitely. :)
I really enjoyed the idea that Bob would want to let loose after his time in the hospital. I think you did I really nice job of creating a quiet and comfortable relationship between Ray and Bob.
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And maybe it's a little embarrassing to admit, but my favorite little detail of this particular story is definitely:
Then again, he might have felt a little sorry for Ray because Adam Lazarra had been the one to open the bus door, buck naked and eating banana sandwich.
Lead singers well and truly are a breed of their own.
I actually snorted with laughter.
And I really, really appreciate how much Bob and Ray are really Bob and Ray in this. I think they can both be very hard to write sometimes, what with not being as public and vocal.
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Thanks for reading and commenting.
And yeah, I'm most intrigued by Bob and Ray because they don't put themselves out there as much as the others, but they create an interesting dynamic, definitely. :)
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