Fic: Aranjuez (Bob/Ray, PG-13) (mcr4u entry)

Jul 07, 2008 11:06

Title : Aranjuez
Author : Arlyn Jayde (atomichatred82)
Recipient : bellheim. I hardly know you, honey, but I hope you like this ( Read more... )

fic: mcr, slash, pairing: bob/ray

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lovelypoet July 8 2008, 17:33:40 UTC
Oh this was just wonderful. I love quiet stories so much. Especially when they are just the right balance of thoughful and funny and the little details.

And maybe it's a little embarrassing to admit, but my favorite little detail of this particular story is definitely:

Then again, he might have felt a little sorry for Ray because Adam Lazarra had been the one to open the bus door, buck naked and eating banana sandwich.

Lead singers well and truly are a breed of their own.

I actually snorted with laughter.

And I really, really appreciate how much Bob and Ray are really Bob and Ray in this. I think they can both be very hard to write sometimes, what with not being as public and vocal.

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valmontheights July 10 2008, 07:44:55 UTC
I'm glad that the quietness seem to have come across well for most people who read this. I'm still trying to find a comfortable pace for writing stories that develop over time like this, and this is just one experiment.

Thanks for reading and commenting.

And yeah, I'm most intrigued by Bob and Ray because they don't put themselves out there as much as the others, but they create an interesting dynamic, definitely. :)

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valmontheights July 10 2008, 07:43:24 UTC
*bows*

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go_gentle July 9 2008, 04:12:34 UTC
Aww, this is cute.

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valmontheights July 10 2008, 07:42:27 UTC
Hee, thanks!

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queen_of_goat July 9 2008, 08:09:17 UTC
I really enjoyed the idea that Bob would want to let loose after his time in the hospital. I think you did I really nice job of creating a quiet and comfortable relationship between Ray and Bob.

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valmontheights July 10 2008, 07:43:10 UTC
In my humble opinion, he really did change a lot from the time he first joined to when TBP was released.

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

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7iris July 10 2008, 04:26:44 UTC
Aww, yay, this is so sweet and soft and quiet--I really enjoyed it!

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valmontheights July 10 2008, 07:42:10 UTC
I'm glad the quietness came across -- it's not usually how I write, which is more BOOM CHICKA WAH WAH if you know what I mean.

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