Caramel Macchiato Lies chapter 1/1 ToraxShou

Mar 09, 2009 14:14

Title: Caramel Macchiato Lies
Chapters: 1/1
Author: mxtrxofsomer
Genre: fluff?
Band(s): Alice Nine
Pairing: Tora x Shou
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: not much
Synopsis: “they are indifferent, they like to pretend we don’t know”
Notes: me was suddenly inspired >///<

“No,” he mumbles cutting me short, face still buried under the protection of his lengthy arms. )

fanfics, toraxshou, alice nine

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haruka_kite March 9 2009, 08:16:09 UTC
Wow... just.. wow.
I can't even descripe the weird feeling in my chest right now. It's really bittersweet in a very beautiful way. I suck with words when I'm stunned, sorry m( _ __' )m
I will go look through the rest of your stuff right away! *runs*

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mxtrxofsomer March 12 2009, 03:56:36 UTC
thank you so much for the time you've spent reading this, also for sharing with me your thoughts. i greatly appreciate them.

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haruka_kite March 12 2009, 09:31:45 UTC
You are a very talented writer, really. Your language is highly developed, and you pour great feeling into all your writings - because I've pretty much read them all now xD;

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mxtrxofsomer March 13 2009, 20:21:21 UTC
i never thought of it that way, and still don't but... thanks a lot, really
whoa. O.O you read them? hope they didn't give you too much headache. and again, thank you so much. it makes me happy that someone reads these fics.

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sazeixrinshou March 9 2009, 11:53:05 UTC
owh god your banner!!!*___*
*melt into water*
it was awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeee DDDD:

aaaaaawww......the ficcccccccc... *melt again*
It was beautiful and cute as usual~~
I didn't guess it was Saga's POV at the first time!!!!XDDD
Tora and Shou just too perfect together.. even Saga-sama couldn't resist it XP
Thank you for the fic, thriss!! *hugs*

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mxtrxofsomer March 12 2009, 03:58:35 UTC
it's me who has to thank you rin, for the time. so thanks so much.
btw, i'll go beta your new fic tomorrow night or on saturday. ^^

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vampire_cake March 11 2009, 09:50:16 UTC
&hearts This is really cute and awesome~
I think I need to learn english more *coz there are many things that I could not understand* But I get the story~

the nearly-unconscious Shou

(>__<) Awww~ Shou is very lovely~ &hearts
Yesss, Shou and Tora are a great couple~ &hearts
Great fic~ Good job~

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mxtrxofsomer March 12 2009, 04:02:10 UTC
thanks so much, it's very heartwarming to know that you read it.

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chiaki05_kr March 11 2009, 18:16:00 UTC
I found it kinda confusing this time... everything is kinda blurry at first, I thought that the black hair one was Tora, in the beginning... is he Shou? LOL, sometimes being Italian totally sux xD
I still liked it though, with the weird-ness it brings somehow, using this kind of point of view :3

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mxtrxofsomer March 12 2009, 04:12:54 UTC
ah... yes, it's all part of the fic's intention, to have people think and make guesses who is who until the characters would reveal themselves completely. and... also.... i adore shou with black hair >///<
thanks a lot. it's my second time using this style but like what i'vei said, i just like it better this time.

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chiaki05_kr March 12 2009, 22:38:00 UTC
Oh I see... then you planned it all, don't cha? XD
And yeah I totally agree =w= black hair Shou is probably my fav as well<3

You're totally welcome~ changing sometimes could be interesting x3

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mxtrxofsomer March 13 2009, 20:02:24 UTC
hihi~ yea. planned it. even put another false dark haired one to get them mixed up
yea, my favourite too. it's rare but he's damn hot when he does it.
glad to know that, thanks. me likes to experiment every once in a while~

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mxtrxofsomer March 17 2009, 14:52:11 UTC
akiiiii~~~ i miss you too! so much!!! *huggeh*
ah, thank you. i'm glad it worked. pon-chan was a potential too. but i like him piping up in conversations better. xp

i'm so soooooorry. if you were trying to contact my phone, you really wouldn't be able to cus... i'm stupid, just like that. i left my charger at home in the province so... my phone's dead (for two weeks now). waaah! >_< so sorry~ but! we have lj and... of course, why haven't i thought of it? i'll add you on ym! i get pretty stupid sometimes, really, ne? do you agree? you should agree! i'm kinda busy this week becus of exams and papers and stuff. but! i hope to talk to you soon! cussssss i wanna!!! i really miss youuuuuuuu
yea! we still have to schedule that! and your cd, yea, i keep on forgetting but it's still here.
*hearts back a hundred times and chuuuuuuuuuus*

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