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Fic: Homecoming; Day 1

Oct 05, 2010 19:08

Title: Homecoming
Author: gorthead
Pairing: James/Lily (one-sided/implied); mostly gen; vaaaague hints of R/S to come
Rating: PG
Word Count: 825
Prompt: Day 1
Warnings: Boys being boys!
Summary: On the train back to Hogwarts, the boys take stock of their summer.
Author’s Notes: I feel I should preface this by saying that all I’ve read for over a month now ( Read more... )

c: james potter, c: sirius black, c: peter pettigrew, c: remus lupin, fest: mm&h

Comments 6

eprime October 5 2010, 20:15:55 UTC

Hee, cute! I liked Sirius messing with James about Lily, and, of course, the last paragraph. ;)

apohdiopsis October 5 2010, 20:50:43 UTC

You forgot to put in the part where Sirius then snogs Remus silly. I assume that's coming in the sequel, though, right? =D

I love this straightforward approach to the prompt. It's perfect.

liebedance October 5 2010, 22:56:11 UTC

I love how they didn't get ANYTHING on the list done. I liked the very literal approach to the prompt.

Also, Sirius is mean and horrid for making James squirm so. :P

museme87 October 6 2010, 00:21:28 UTC

I also enjoyed the literal approach to the prompt, and it was great that not a single thing got accomplished. I feel like that happens a lot in real life as well...

Sirius' teasing was excellent. Poor James. He probably deserved it for one thing or another. I loved the arm around the shoulder bit (R/S forever!), but I agree with apohdiopsis: you forgot the snogging. :)

huntingsnarks October 6 2010, 07:41:11 UTC

That was great! Cheery and light-hearted and entertaining. Nice one. :)