Marauders Rare Pairs ♦ Fic: Doubt Is Painful

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Title: Doubt Is Painful
Author: Ravenne_Crion
Pairing: Sirius/Lily
Rating: PG
Word Count: 2139
Prompt: 18. He's pretty sure he isn't just doing this to annoy Snape. She isn't.
Warnings: None
Summary: Many factors can point to why a choice may be a bad idea. Sirius tries to convince Lily that those factors don't matter.

Comments

[eprime]

Ah, nothing messier than teenage romance in a closed environment. :) I liked how you showed Sirius' vulnerabilities here. Who could resist Sirius Black's kiss after all? I wonder what happens from here!

[pavlablack]

I really like your Sirius--he is such a teenage boy here, unable to filter what comes out of his mouth but still helpless when it comes to dealing with feelings. I can see why he would be attracted to Lily, probably the only girl he sees as his equal. It's heartbreaking the way he can't stand the idea that she thinks he is horrible or that she is taking pity on him. The tension you create between them is very real and makes me want to see more of them as a couple.

[wwmrsweasleydo]

Poor Sirius: Compulsive, immature and obnoxious but not horrible! That line made me laugh and then immediately feel guilty for laughing because Sirius was so hurt! You draw his character really well.