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Marauder Rare Pairs ♦ Fic: If You Ever Want To Play

Sep 20, 2011 11:26

Title: If You Ever Want To Play
Author: pessen03
Pairing: James Potter / Severus Snape
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2,345
Warnings: dub-con and dirty-talk
Summary: James newest prank on Severus takes a surprising turn.
Author's Notes: Don’t be scared off because of the warnings.

( If You Ever Want To Play )

submission: fic, c: james potter, rating: nc17, c: severus snape, fest: rare pairs, p: james/severus, length: 1k-5k

Comments 14

secretlypadfoot September 20 2011, 23:03:52 UTC

James is such a slut. :)

This was well done. You really made the pair work.

pessen03 November 23 2011, 19:18:30 UTC

lol thank you!!!!

he is a slut and loves it :P

freakingcrups September 21 2011, 00:40:01 UTC

James, you little slut, you. I liked this story! It was a yummy read :)

pessen03 November 23 2011, 19:19:07 UTC

thank you very much!!! it's always scary trying out a new pairing

liebedance September 23 2011, 00:18:00 UTC

I usually dislike James/Severus, but this had some flair to it. I wasn't shocked at all the Severus didn't believe the note, especially with James & Co's suspicious actions!

I also liked blubbering!James: "“I was thinking… if you are up for it… that maybe we could… well, as you called it… ‘play’,” James stammered."

But, I think the ending was my absolute favourite :)

pessen03 November 23 2011, 19:20:10 UTC

lol thank you so much!
I was so insecure writing this!!!
thank you for trying it even if you're not a lover of this pairing :P

pavlablack September 23 2011, 01:46:06 UTC

You've done a good job showing how two people who hate each other can still be overcome with physical attraction. I like how both boys react to the letter Severus writes--the way they hate each other and hate the way their bodies respond to the thought of the other but just can't help themselves.

pessen03 November 23 2011, 19:21:20 UTC

thank you :)
it was fun writing it even if it was a first time and a bit shakey...
I love hot angry hate-sex when the lust can be so extreme you disregard your hate for the other man..

wwmrsweasleydo October 5 2011, 22:10:49 UTC

I don't usually read Snape pairings but I'm glad I made an exception for this. The animosity and lust positively ooze out of the screen. Their denial and capitulation are very believably written.

pessen03 November 23 2011, 19:25:22 UTC

yay thank you so freaking much for reading it and liking it!!
that means my intention got transfered into the fic because that was totally was I was aiming for..