The Space Between Us- Chapter 5

[mutantwrites]

Comments

[trovia]

I love this fic! I've been longing for good plotty fic, and I especially enjoy your new take on the mutiny. Narcho was one hell of a villain. :) Zarek is just fun. Also I'm curious about what'll happen with poor addicted Felix.

I would have thought better of Racetrack though. ;)

Hope I'll have a chance to read on soon.

[daybreak777]

Justice! Good. That's my immediate reaction, I have to say. :-) I really like the way you characterize the women in this chapter. There is something strong and resolute about them. Tory and Starbuck and Laura. I like Racetrack here too, she reminds me of Kelly.

I'm so curious how it will all end! For Hoshi and Felix and Jesse. And all of them!

[safenthecity]

God, this chapter was intense. I was on the edge of my seat the entire time- holy crap.

Zarek was positively delightful, as ever when you write him, and I really needed that, with everything else that was happening.

Sharon and Louis killing those three... Was so... It's horrible, but I'm only sorry that Gage was on duty at the time.

And somehow you made the execution at the end here almost as painful as what happened in canon. There's something just chilling about the idea of Tory and Noel dying that way, by Cylon and human hands alike.

[puszysty]

Damn girl, you've gotten bloodthirsty! Definitely an action packed chapter, and I'm glad to see the sunshine boys gone once and for all.

[ecstaticdance]

So intense! But you had great moments to lighten it up. Helo complaining about the (lack of) space in the air vents. Tigh in all his terse glory as Sharon kicks him a gun. And they were well-spaced, so that they didn't detract from the gravity of what was going on.

Also -- special love for Laura sympathizing with Sonja.