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musubi7

Pineapple

Jul 23, 2009 10:16

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harosketch July 26 2009, 23:52:31 UTC

Pineapple kiss! How sweet ♥

I liked how you changed the tone entirely in so few words, and yet had this continuity running through it. Really well written.

musubi7 July 27 2009, 00:18:58 UTC

Thank you! :)

ejunknown July 27 2009, 09:17:01 UTC

I love the tone of forgiveness at the end of this. ;__;! It's hard to find an adjective for this, but I loved it. ;u; Great job

musubi7 July 27 2009, 09:55:28 UTC

pfffft I rendered someone speechless. ;D Sweeet.

When writing Lani (I've written her a few more times elsewhere), I try to incorperate forgiveness between her and Al as often as possible. Modern Hawaii is pretty much like any other state and we're damned proud/happy to be a state too. Yeah, America kinda pulled a dick move, but it was a long time ago and we've both grown from it. America gives us food, we give them places to dump military bases. Ect, ect.

Thanks for lettin' me know what you thought! :D