When writing Lani (I've written her a few more times elsewhere), I try to incorperate forgiveness between her and Al as often as possible. Modern Hawaii is pretty much like any other state and we're damned proud/happy to be a state too. Yeah, America kinda pulled a dick move, but it was a long time ago and we've both grown from it. America gives us food, we give them places to dump military bases. Ect, ect.
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I liked how you changed the tone entirely in so few words, and yet had this continuity running through it. Really well written.
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When writing Lani (I've written her a few more times elsewhere), I try to incorperate forgiveness between her and Al as often as possible. Modern Hawaii is pretty much like any other state and we're damned proud/happy to be a state too. Yeah, America kinda pulled a dick move, but it was a long time ago and we've both grown from it. America gives us food, we give them places to dump military bases. Ect, ect.
Thanks for lettin' me know what you thought! :D
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