Title: Boys and Their Toys
Rating: PG for implications
Genre: General
Characters/Pairings: America
Summary: When I was a child, I did as children do.
Words: 233
Notes: I'm actually happy where this one is. I don't want to do anything to it or expand it. It's...it's angsty again. I'm not sure how well this reflects my view of my nation with the amount
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Thank you.
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This was very well done, I really liked it.
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I really enjoyed seeing the change from childhood to manhood. I liked how you drew a parallel between the two phases. And the last line was perfect.
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Yah, this little guy is like a tragic hero in his own respect.
Parallelism seems to be quickly becoming my niche. Which is ok, because I like doing it. :)
And last line, I was hoping you'd like it. ;)
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