Boys and Their Toys

Dec 31, 2009 03:56

Title: Boys and Their Toys
Rating: PG for implications
Genre: General
Characters/Pairings: America
Summary: When I was a child, I did as children do.
Words: 233
Notes: I'm actually happy where this one is.  I don't want to do anything to it or expand it.  It's...it's angsty again.  I'm not sure how well this reflects my view of my nation with the amount ( Read more... )

contest, america

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Review ;) sweetfragrance9 December 31 2009, 14:53:40 UTC
I could imagine America here. ^^ Nice drabble. Keep up the good work and good luck for the contest. ^^;;

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Re: Review ;) musubi7 December 31 2009, 21:18:11 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it.

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arifureta December 31 2009, 14:59:01 UTC
Sad, sentimental and serious - I like it.
Thank you.

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musubi7 December 31 2009, 21:18:26 UTC
You're welcome! :D

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sparkism December 31 2009, 19:12:04 UTC
Oh, America. ;3; ♥
This was very well done, I really liked it.

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musubi7 December 31 2009, 21:20:56 UTC
Thanks! I'm happy that you liked it!

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tanya_tsuki December 31 2009, 20:19:56 UTC
Aw, America :(

I really enjoyed seeing the change from childhood to manhood. I liked how you drew a parallel between the two phases. And the last line was perfect.

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musubi7 December 31 2009, 21:22:35 UTC
Aw, America :(
Yah, this little guy is like a tragic hero in his own respect.

Parallelism seems to be quickly becoming my niche. Which is ok, because I like doing it. :)

And last line, I was hoping you'd like it. ;)

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